Cultivation: A Pair of Immortal Path Merchants

How shameless! He still doesn't know who he offended... A moment of silence!

Touch your head~_(:з∠)_ to calm down

The second half is a bit confusing!

Very nice! Come on! ! ^_^

. . . . . . Can I make some suggestions... Can the author not use words like poppy, evil spirit, etc. To describe appearance in large sections (these words are almost criticized)... At first glance, I thought I was watching a Mary Sue youth romance drama... Also, about the characters, I can see that the author wants to write a story about wisdom and beauty (. . . . . ) Coexists with the protagonist, but... What he does makes people feel that if he dies, he must have killed himself... I would say that Bai Su is a bit stupid, if he is not the protagonist's cannon fodder... Xiao Gong won't say much, just look at the male protagonist of the campus romance drama. The best way to write a novel is to write whatever comes to mind, because unless you are very skilled, it will be easy to ruin the writing (the spirit will be scattered and the form will be scattered), so I think the author Sang can first design the character of the protagonist, then write the events, and then write an outline according to the character's character and how he will act when things happen... That's about it... If the author Sang doesn't like it, you can just pretend he didn't see it hahaha

Pay attention to the typo, that one really has a long posture, it should be a long experience.

Keep writing, I'm looking forward to the end of this article

This little boy is so silly and sweet! I'm really depressed. Can the author take advantage of this in the copywriting?

No, I think it looks very good. Come on, spread the flowers

Congratulations on entering V! Happy birthday! ! ! I love you so much =3=