Tales of Kaifeng's Two Cats (A Different Seven Heroes and Five Gallants Fanfiction)

"Nenei" is a big thorn in the side of the author~ within

Of course it's HE. The author should come back and fill in the gaps as soon as possible. Readers will also be happy.

It's really good-looking. I hope Yu Xiao and Lord Zhan fall in love and get married eventually. I very much hope that the author can update it and fill in the pitfalls.

So many cats~ Meow, meow, meow, meow again~

Haha, I came here from Zhaoba. Actually, I think it's more comfortable to read articles in Jinjiang~ Well, as long as you don't abuse it, that's fine...

Conscience is here... I am a writer and understand the difficulty of being a writer...

Good Words Collection Shop|Mirror Orders Comments on "The Story of Two Cats in Kaifeng" Words written in front After entering the article page, Jingming habitually looked at the author's table of contents page and copy, and then Jingming felt that the readers who follow the article must be very hard. The author updates once or twice a month and cannot feed the readers. So, if the mirror falls into a pit, do we have to squat at the bottom of the pit and wait for the author to update it? %>_<%, The author must work hard to update after receiving the long review, so that the data will be improved immediately. After all, Qiwu fan still has a certain readership, although the BG is relatively small... Let's talk about the copywriting. From the copywriting, it can be clearly seen that the male and female protagonists are competing against each other. It is not the feeling of enemies not getting together. The general direction of the article is also explained relatively clearly, which can arouse the reader's desire to read. And after reading the copy, Jing Jing is very much looking forward to the daily life of the two cats in the article. I really like all kinds of daily life with loving interactions! So, the mirror is now on! Watch while reading Mirror likes the author's introduction very much. Through this flashback introduction, readers can clearly feel that the author's writing skills are good, and the interaction between the male and female protagonists has begun to make people feel distressed. Although Mirror cannot read pornographic stories, Mirror believes that generally this kind of pornography that looks very abusive will not come true! The heroine will definitely be fine! Right? However, even if I know that there is such a thing as the protagonist's radiance, the mirror will still vaguely show the typical author Jun Zhen's sadistic abuse, so I can't laugh when I see a happy everyday mirror%>_<% After reading the first chapter, Jing Jing felt that although the encounter between the male and female protagonists was a bit cliched and ordinary, the author's description was very detailed, and the demeanor and appearance description, as well as the description of the scene on the roadside, were very accurate. It can be said that it feels like flowing clouds and flowing water. The only thing I think could be improved is if Zhan Mao instead of shouting "I'm going to call the police if you don't change!" Instead of doing some simple reasoning, the first chapter would be more interesting. Of course, Zhan Mao is not Mr. Bao after all. He is of course a type who pays more attention to combat effectiveness than reasoning, so I just mentioned the mirror casually. If the heroine is wearing women's clothing at this time, it can be said that it is a women's style purse or something. Since he is dressed in men's clothing and Zhanmao has good fighting ability, all the mirror can think of is—— Zhan Mao walked over with great aura, glanced at the heroine, and then grabbed the old man's hand. Piles of money bags ran out from the old man's sleeves. Then many people around him found that they were missing their money bags... Haha, the concept of the mirror is indeed very cliché, but I don't know why I prefer it. Maybe it's due to different personal tastes. Of course, it's entirely okay to follow the author's writing style. After all, Zhan Mao admires Master Bao very much. When I saw the end of the first chapter that the heroine's idol is the hero, and then thought about the tone of the two people's enemies in the copywriting, I immediately looked in the mirror with anticipation! When I read the second chapter, Jing Jing suddenly felt that the author's wording was somewhat "ancient but not ancient and not modern". For example, the sentence "He can rely on his youth of sixteen years" can be seen that the author is playing with ancient writing style. In fact, it is probably not that the author is deliberately playing hard to play, but he just thinks it is more suitable to write this way. However, Jing Jing personally feels that this article is generally based on vernacular and modern terms. It is actually completely acceptable to write ancient Chinese with such a surname, but suddenly using an ancient sentence will feel a bit strange. Because the author's articles include "cute looks", "beautiful boys", "slumping immunity", "complaints", etc., You can't be ancient even if you want to be, haha! In this way, it would be more appropriate to use modern Chinese characters entirely, and the number of words might be even greater than before. There are always some people among readers who really don't like articles that talk about old times and use internet slang at the same time. Also, at the end of the second chapter, the heroine is called a "fairy and beautiful boy." Although it is easy to set up the image of a "fairy boy" for the heroine, if a fairy is added, the author may not have written that feeling. In this way, the sentence "all the people watching in the audience were taken away by this beautiful young man who was like a god" seemed a bit weak. Personally, I think the heroine's smile, which is both male and female, can be described more, or her eyes can be described to make the character fuller. In addition, the article highlights the heroine's peerless beauty, but the author mostly uses vague descriptions such as "beautiful", "beautiful", and "beautiful boy". Even when describing the appearance, he only describes the eyebrows and lips. It can be said that the character creation is still a bit weak. Although the current Internet articles do not like too many descriptions of appearance, a gay friend of the Mirror said: "My male protagonist does not need to write anything. Just describe him as long-legged and gentle and handsome, and the readers will finish it all." But since the focus here is the appearance of the heroine, then such a description is not as satisfying as saying that the heroine has a heart-wrenching smile, or that the heroine's eyes are seductive, such a bloody description that makes people tired of looking at it. Then, the heroine's admiration for the hero is still so cute, making people look forward to more interactions between the two in the future. However, Jingjing feels that the heroine may need a transition from admiring the hero to speaking out. She obviously did not dare to hurt the hero at first, but later she directly showed a hostile attitude. I think it would be more reasonable to add a description in which the male protagonist constantly speaks harshly to the female protagonist, and then the powerful image of the male protagonist in the female protagonist's mind is shattered into pieces. Because I feel that the male protagonist is already very venomous after that, so adding this plot is totally okay. In addition, the mirror is curious about where the heroine's white cat mask came from... In ancient times, without paint and plastic, what material was pure white? White wood? White jade? Orz, the mirror is just to open up your imagination, I don't understand this kind of thing, haha, just ignore me. General Comment Zhan Mao is very beautiful, and Silver Cat is also very beautiful. The image of the heroine is still a bit thin, maybe because I didn't look carefully in the mirror in some places. Why didn't you look carefully in the mirror? In fact, I think this is quite important, because when I look in the mirror, I feel that when it comes to cases, there is a big difference between this article and the daily article. The content of the case is very serious and complicated, and there are many characters coming and going, and the suspense setting does not seem to be too exciting. Of course, I think there are not many web articles with exciting suspense nowadays, so why do so many people write suspense reasoning? Jing Jing believes that this is because most people integrate the case with daily life when writing suspense reasoning, and there are cute little things about daily life everywhere when solving the case. In addition, when I saw the brothel plot, Jing Jing originally thought that the heroine should put on women's clothing... Is there any? Ahem. In general, because the daily life in the copywriting is very cute, I think if many people click in to watch it, what they want to see is the interaction between the two cats, so they may not be happy after seeing the continuous plot of solving the case. Mirror is not saying that there is no need for a case. On the contrary, how can a story with a 75-year background not have a case? I just hope that there will be more daily interactions in the case, so that everyone can take more breaks while brainstorming. Of course, the above are all Jing Jing's personal opinions, ~(@^_^@)~ and Jing Jing is not a die-hard fan of Qi Wu, so I'll just laugh off the misunderstandings, okay!

Collection... Cats... Many cats...

The author's cat theme is relatively new. . Come on~~! ! ! ! ! !

Haha. Zhan Zhao's complaints are so loving. Come on!