Reborn in the Apocalypse: Staying Alive

Also, what about the so-called indifference of the heroine? Where have you gone? Then the disobedient space weapon spirit can be directly thrown back into the space. If you offend the heroine, you can just kill her directly. If you babble a lot, you can kill her if she is disgusted or angry. He's obviously very strong, but he acts like he's very weak

I saw Chapter 84. The writing was too messy, and there was a lot of nonsense. The heroine was written as a heroine, a space weapon spirit was written as a child, and so much nonsense about him was written. How many perspectives are this written from? "Zi Mo dodged wave after wave of fire attacks from the monster and looked at the monster in front of him excitedly. "I really like you more and more. Can you be my pet? I know you understand." The monster snorted at Zi Mo and glanced disdainfully at the person in front of him, "You are a little human, and you still want to keep me as a pet. I'll see if I don't eat you." "Oh, tell me carefully that you don't agree. You have to let such a cute kid like me use force against you before you are willing to be my pet. Then don't blame me for being too harsh." After Zi Mo said this, he winked at the monster. The monster's lips twitched when he looked at the little human in front of him. He really couldn't stand it anymore. He made a series of calculations at Zi Mo. Unfortunately, he didn't burn Zi Mo this time. Zi Mo patted his clothes disdainfully, but there was actually nothing on his clothes. "Small, do you really think you can hurt me? I just let you play with you. Look, I won't deal with you now." Zi Mo waved his hand, and the monster's limbs were wrapped in vines. I looked at the rattan on my body, glanced at Zi Mo with disdain, opened my mouth, and my body was covered with red flames. A few minutes later, Zi Mo looked at the still burning monster and said, "Stop burning. You can break my rattan. Do you think it's the ordinary superpowers outside? Don't compare my rattan with those fragile grasses." "Oh my god, why don't you listen to me when I tell you not to burn it? What if you burn it all clean? If you don't look good at all, then I won't like you anymore. If I don't like you, then you are useless. Maybe I will roast you and eat you." As soon as the monster heard what Zi Mo said, the fire on its body gradually extinguished, leaving only the rattan tied with ropes. Zi Mo sighed in admiration, "This fire control ability is really good. It is many times stronger than the superpowers outside." When Zi Mo looked around the monster's body, he didn't see a hint of cunning in the monster's eyes. The retribution for this carelessness was coming. "Ah..." Zi Mo looked at himself who was completely black. Now Zi Mo was really angry. He really liked the monster in front of him and really wanted to keep it as a pet. Who knew that this monster was really disobedient at all. He thought it had stopped, but as soon as he relaxed, it struck him with a bolt of lightning, which made his whole body black. . . . . . . . "

"Dan" is a big thorn in the side of the author~

"Dan" is a big thorn in the side of the author~

My mind is wandering all the time, I can't get out of the past, I will die at any time

The most annoying thing when reading an article is that there is danger or something, and you talk a lot of nonsense without telling others the reason and you still want others to listen to you! Since Mi has said so much nonsense, why not just say that there are zombies and animals will die?

Wucao! That Xia Yu's playmate 4 is gay!

The heroine's values ​​are not in line with mine. She is cold and ruthless. If the apocalyptic background had not blurred her a little bit, she would have been disgusting. The plot of the story is very good, but the main character's thoughts are going astray. It would be nice if the author could pay more attention to it. Of course, I can't say that my thoughts are necessarily mainstream or correct. I just want to express my voice as a reader to the author. The words shouldn't be too much, right? I've only read this article so far, and I'm going to read the others. It's amazing to have persisted in coding for many years, so keep growing!

One father and one mother? What is it called? ?

The author, after reading a few chapters, I will give you some advice. A story without background description is absolutely impossible. The code must have the background of the times, the background of the characters, well-written people, and the description of the environment and background is especially good. I hope that the plot will be constantly interspersed to make the story three-dimensional from people to objects. Second, the plot must be coherent, and there must be a theme within the 3,000 words of the online article, otherwise it will just pave the way for the next 3,000 words. You have to be clear about how you want to end and how you want to seduce people. Or vice versa. There is nothing else left. Writing skills are developed through continuous practice. Come on.