Ageless

Magan just realized that there have been no updates for a month!!! Is this a trap?

Damn it... I just lost the exciting part after seeing it. You can't do that! Love the updates!

This article instantly piqued my interest (>^ω^

Update from the author soon╮(╯▽╰)╭

Very interesting article. Please update.

Babble? Am I a sofa? The author writes wonderfully. I just like to see this~ Looking at the sky...

I'm very sorry for taking so long to comment (bow). After reading Chapter 19, deleting, deleting, and editing to see that there is probably nothing that conflicts with your update, this review has finally taken shape. As the title says, this article introduces readers to the ageless twelve-year-old girl Xu Yue and the heartwarming stories that happen around her. The story of this article is novel and the plot unfolds slowly. It whets the appetite of many readers from the beginning. The author has done a good job in creating the atmosphere. From the slightly scary suspense in the first few chapters to the warmth of the little girl being adopted by the policeman, the transition is natural and will not give readers the feeling of being in a drama. According to the author's girl's request, I started the story without any nonsense. I went to the ball shop to buy a strong wooden stick and prepared to hit the author on the head. ∩__∩ First of all, it is recommended not to jeopardize your family fortune when the character appears. This will make the readers feel a sense of "=Dan=", just like the police beauties who saw Su Ziqiao, their three views were destroyed, and their glass hearts were shattered to the ground. The author's writing style can indeed allow everyone to understand the character and basic background of the character at the first time. However, readers will also be eager to get more surprises in the process of reading the article, not in the initial character settings, but in following the reading between the lines, they will gradually discover different sides of the author's characters. The author can try to "hide" the characters and reveal the clues bit by bit while writing, instead of throwing them all out in one piece, which can arouse readers' interest more. Regarding this point, the author obviously did a good job when writing the foreshadowing of the plot, and sprinkled it with sincerity^_^. Several suspense points in the article are designed to be very attractive, including the reason why the little girl stopped growing for so many years, the fool who fell off the cliff, the identity of the mysterious man Gu Yu, and the strange blood streaks on the little girl's face. The author has a very good ability to exaggerate the atmosphere, making readers unconsciously deeply involved in the plot, and want to continue reading in order to learn the truth of the matter. Apart from the introduction of the characters, the second thing I want to remind you about the details is: it is best not to add idioms deliberately. Although they are good words, if used too much, they will inevitably appear to be piled up. What's more, sometimes, the use of idioms in the article will give people a feeling of inappropriateness. To give a simple example, "(Su Ziciao) immediately jumped up and pushed his brother away, and with a weak body and a strong mind, he grabbed the door and ran away." In this sentence, at least the usage of the word 'disabled but strong in spirit' is incorrect. Personally, I think that in this case, a more common idiom such as "panic and desperate" is enough; however, everyone has different opinions, and the author can definitely change it better if he thinks about it a little more. Another example is this sentence, "So he sat upright and said seriously, "Lu Shixing, you are still in your prime, don't use such a tone of death to alarmist, it is not good. "" Putting aside the usage of idioms in this sentence, I think that overly literal words should be avoided in conversations. Although the dialogue between the characters in the novel cannot completely copy the original sentences in real life, they must retain a part of the atmosphere of life: "Lu Shixing, people of your age should not always talk like an old man summarizing his speech. This is not good!" I simply changed the sentences based on them to make them more like ordinary people's conversations. However, this is a bad example (please hold your hands together to apologize). The author just looked at it and smiled. The author has a unique writing style, and the narration tone is humorous and interesting, making people smile and fall in love with the characters described by the author. At the same time, it can be seen that the author is more considerate in the detailed description. He should be a person who is very good at observing life, so he can inadvertently capture the readers' hearts when he writes the narrative. I picked out a few fragments that are still fresh in my memory. They are not descriptions of the protagonist, but they can achieve no less effective results, which makes me very impressed. First, when Lu Shixing came home late at night, he covered his younger brother and the little girl with a thin blanket, left a small lamp on, and then went back to the house to rest. The image of a careful and gentle brother was sketched out. Different from the feeble portrayal of characters by many online authors, the author did not directly say "what kind of person is my brother", but used a few simple action descriptions to show readers the image of Lu Shixing. I think this is really commendable. Similarly, there is a plot where Mr. Su slaps the table angrily while talking to his son on the phone, but after hanging up the phone, he carefully picks up the cup that accidentally fell on the carpet and sighs helplessly. That cup was Su Ziqiao's only gift to his father. By describing Mr. Su's cherishment of this cup, the author expresses the conflicting old man's blood and affection for his son, making the figure of a haggard old man with a stubborn temper quietly appear in front of the readers. When reading this article, we will all fall in love with the girl Xu Yue who has always looked like a teenager. We are fascinated by her cute and ignorant appearance and mysterious experiences. When she shows her beast-like expression, we cannot be afraid but feel distressed. We will also fall in love with the seemingly unruly Su Zijiao, helpless because of his off-line behavior from time to time, but under his careful attention. I couldn't help but be moved when I was guarding the little girl; I fell in love with the careful and gentle brother Lu Shixing, and the stubborn old man who was always blown away by Su Zi's cunning. To conclude with a sentence from the copywriting, Xu Jun will be happy forever. How can such feelings and vows not make people moved? It's rare to meet this unique girl in my life. I believe that Su Zi will protect her with all his life. Please keep up the good work, the author, and I hope your writing will get better and better. The above is just one family's opinion. ——Illegal gathering | Produced by Changpingpu BY Xiaoya PS: Regarding the title of your book, I am silently covering my face... Why is it on the cover "Guidelines for Raising a Fake Lolita", and the title is "Eternal Beast Boy". Search on Baidu it is called "If You Are Not Old", but no matter where you search on Google you can't find it... What is going on, this crazy world! ==|||

Gu Yu couldn't be that fool, so Su Ziqiao would be the tragic second male lead, right?

Come and give the author some flowers~

So cute girl, marry me! (*≧▽≦)