
How to Properly Feed the Savior
如何正确喂养救世主
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- Modern Era
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- 12y ago
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I didn't finish it, but I felt it was a bit long when I was halfway through it, so I skipped to the end. I just want to say... It was so uncomfortable for me to read. It was okay at the beginning, but became more and more uncomfortable toward the end. This is one of the most uncomfortable novels I have ever read. I don't know why, but I feel that Ender is so lonely. No matter where he is, in which world he is, he has no trust or wholehearted companionship (meaning real). From the beginning to the end, the people around him are more or less scheming and planning. In the end, it can only end with Ender getting tired and leaving... It's so uncomfortable.
I didn't believe in love at first, but after reading this, I really don't believe in love anymore_(:_‖∠)_. Interest and use are mixed into love, which makes me feel extremely sick. I really can't believe people's hearts. What a great little angel character Tom had before he took back the soul piece! ! ! ! As a result, after the soul is complete, the big devil (? ?д?) And Ward's mother, love has to be used. It's amazing, so a revolutionary like Tom is not worthy of having love. Too many uses and benefits made him mix it with love in the end. Love mixed with impurities becomes disgusting. I admit that from the perspective of future generations, Tom is indeed a great revolutionary, but Tom's heart is too complicated and he wants too much, so he loses more. So, Angel Ander did a great job! ! ! ! Come join our Double Eleven party hahahahahaha [funny]
This ending is not bad. In fact, I had a premonition during the final battle. That situation was obviously the convergence of all souls. At the beginning of the third ending, the so-called energy plan was obviously a trap, and Ender taught Tom to stand on the favorable side of public opinion. So he wanted the Muggles to make the first move. When I see the final situation caused by the war, I am sure, because this kind of thing does not need to look at the cause and method, just the result. The result of the war is that Tom has reached his ideal situation and has begun to unfold... Alas, Ender is still too kind, and his heart is too weak. Spread your hands... This kind of scumbag can be trained at will in the novel and it may change something, but in reality... Haha Θ_Θ, some people always have something more important than love in their hearts, people like □□ are really terrible...
I saw some people upstairs saying that Ander was hypocritical →_→, and some people used to say that Ander was the Holy Father. I have nothing to say about Holy Father. Anyway, this word can be praised or criticized, and it is indeed very vivid (after all, the EG author wants to regard Ender as Jesus...). As for hypocrisy... I want to say that Ender in the original EG is a patient suffering from post-war depression... Depression is not the cause of the koala, Ender in EG is like this, please understand, thank you (from an Ender)
After watching the third ending, I feel bad. QAQ feels bad for Ander. He will never trust others wholeheartedly again.
? ? ? ? ! ! ! ! Damn it, ah! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Tom, get out of here! ! ! ! ! Ender is not sad, take Ender away
Cough cough cough cough It was a very happy ending at first. I coughed up a mouthful of old blood. (That's too cruel. I should have noticed my wife's crazy hints earlier and put down my phone in the second ending and became single instantly. Well, first of all, let me say that this article is undoubtedly very good, it is smooth and refreshing, and the logic is complete and correct. This is the best HP or EG fanfic I have ever read. As a result, I learned a truth, the protagonist who is too smart will not have good results otz (In fact, I also looked at the ending of EG and was stunned for a while, maybe I was too pretentious; ( What I am most satisfied with this article is that the planning of the entire story, the formulation of various strategies, the formulation of conspiracies, etc. Are very perfect, consistent with reality and the development of the characters, and the relationship between the characters does not deviate from the logic itself (I wonder if the wife has let the characters run away? |?ω?` If not, madam, you are indeed a big boss(?? Benefit?) Then I thought that there would be an Ender-style ending. After all, it was my illusion. I thought that Ender could avoid these distressing things, but my wife didn't give him this way and I couldn't say anything. After all, the logic of the Ender-style ending would be more confusing, because this situation cannot be solved in the text. Anyway, what's the point of forcing it? I have finished reading all the novels otz, and I miss Valentine a lot. She is so good, but there are no lines from Xiaohua in this article, so another thing I care about is that when the savior suddenly disappeared in Ender's original world when they were fighting each other, they would die on the spot (I don't know if they did. Anyway, I died on the spot in the end. I'm still wondering if this article is actually some awesome triangle cp, or the kind I like, it's so damn sweet. I'm optimistic about when this love triangle will get a tag. Finally, I wish my wife good health ( ̄ε(# ̄)☆╰╮o( ̄▽ ̄///)
It's okay, dear Ender, your mother's Enterprise is heading to the edge of the universe. You can go and play with it. And the man next to you who takes advantage of you actually has the same philosophy as your Barbie... Your mother and your father are in love and killing each other, so you can...
Maybe I don't like this kind of philosophical ending, and I can't understand Ender's character from the game, and I can't accept Xiaotang's final transformation. I still like the relaxed writing style. The author is a good author, but it is a pity that Xiaotang's capricious betrayal in the article gradually made me lose my love for the author's writing style. When Ander and Xiaotang planned the future together, they thought they would continue to work side by side. Maybe I'm still suitable for watching idiots
I... I still want to hit you QAQ It's really... It's the most depressing and desperate text I've ever seen... It's obviously not particularly sadistic, nor is it a dark and dark direction, but it's this indescribable, indefinable gray color that makes me feel so depressed... QWQ