Announcement: Something came up in the author's real life, so updates stopped for a while. I'm sorry to everyone still reading. Things are more or less sorted out now, and updates should resume in the next few days. - Author, February 25, 2015
Also known as: The Heavenly Thunder Keeps Trying to Strike Me
If he could start over, Mu Chenyuan would make those two bastards wish they were dead.
As it happened, he was reborn and got his revenge on the scum.
But why was there always a bolt of heavenly thunder hanging over his head, trying to strike him? (╯‵□′)╯︵┴─┴
Ever since Mu Chenyuan was reborn,
by the standards of a harem novel, this had to be a story about a nobody rising to greatness.
By the standards of a comeback story, this had to be about a good-for-nothing turning his life around.
By the standards of a transmigration erotica, this had to be a story brimming with steamy scenes.
But from Mu Chenyuan's perspective as the protagonist, this was a story about being tormented by heavenly thunder.
Heavenly Thunder: It's getting dark, Chenyuan. (~o￣▽￣)~o
Mu Chenyuan, with all his clothes turned to ash: (╯‵□′)╯︵┴─┴
In truth, this is a story about someone who rises to success only to end up being kept under someone's thumb. Honestly, it's ridiculous.
Look into the author's serious eyes: this is a serious level-up story disguised as a cute and fluffy one.
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The Sexual Worship of a Deranged Believer: an exploration of the equation between faith and sexual worship.
… Author, you asked for a character in BS and have already received the picture, but it is a waste of painter's labor and hurtful to accept it without using it. It is better to just say that you don't like to cancel the order after a long time and not hang up. It would be more direct to say that you don't like to cancel the order… Since your article is not finished yet, this picture will be accepted by default without recycling. Please do not use that Q version again. Thank you.
The author will update it soon. The writing is very good. Spread the flowers~
After reading the copywriting, I thought this article was good, and I didn't expect to be disappointed. The writing was just a bit off, and it was heart-wrenching to read. . So white and spicy. Go chase other hotties
Damn, aren't you going to write your article "The Belief Methods of Abnormal Believers"?
Overall, I like the setting, but I just want to remind the author:
1) Read it before posting to find some sentences that don't make sense.
2) The typo rate is high.
It can be seen that the author is very attentive and the writing style is also good, but sometimes the description is a bit simplistic and I had to read it twice to understand the meaning.
There is a paragraph in Chapter 11: "The stall owner who made the following inner demon oath... He also wants to give it to you, but unfortunately he can't." Should it be more reasonable to change it to "I want to give it to you too"?
There is a sentence in Chapter 12, "The details will be discussed later. At this time, Mu Chenyuan and his party...", The sentence "The details will be discussed later," is quite awkward to read.
Probably this kind of small problem occurs occasionally, and the flaws are not covered up. Don't mind my personal opinion.
The author really needs to practice his writing!
Why can we stop here... I'm so curious about what happened next! !
It's 2021, good guys
It's 2016. . . .
… Author, you asked for a character in BS and have already received the picture, but it is a waste of painter's labor and hurtful to accept it without using it. It is better to just say that you don't like to cancel the order after a long time and not hang up. It would be more direct to say that you don't like to cancel the order… Since your article is not finished yet, this picture will be accepted by default without recycling. Please do not use that Q version again. Thank you.
The author will update it soon. The writing is very good. Spread the flowers~
After reading the copywriting, I thought this article was good, and I didn't expect to be disappointed. The writing was just a bit off, and it was heart-wrenching to read. . So white and spicy. Go chase other hotties
Damn, aren't you going to write your article "The Belief Methods of Abnormal Believers"?
Overall, I like the setting, but I just want to remind the author: 1) Read it before posting to find some sentences that don't make sense. 2) The typo rate is high. It can be seen that the author is very attentive and the writing style is also good, but sometimes the description is a bit simplistic and I had to read it twice to understand the meaning. There is a paragraph in Chapter 11: "The stall owner who made the following inner demon oath... He also wants to give it to you, but unfortunately he can't." Should it be more reasonable to change it to "I want to give it to you too"? There is a sentence in Chapter 12, "The details will be discussed later. At this time, Mu Chenyuan and his party...", The sentence "The details will be discussed later," is quite awkward to read. Probably this kind of small problem occurs occasionally, and the flaws are not covered up. Don't mind my personal opinion.
The author really needs to practice his writing!
Why can we stop here... I'm so curious about what happened next! !
Come on↖(^ω^)↗