The Pear Garden Performer

Sorry, I forgot to read the copy, so I just clicked on the text to read it!!! La la... It turns out that the two of them are childhood sweethearts!!!

When I watched an opera before, I immediately found it very complicated, because I really had to prepare a lot of relevant information, otherwise it wouldn't have the same shape or flavor. But I don't understand these things, so if there aren't many opera parts in the text, it doesn't matter if the key points are good! Come on big

Moving on, could it be that the male protagonist and the female protagonist are actually 'little friends'???

Why did Lan Jingzhi and Ye Zhan decide? Just because I watched a few shows? And as the boss, it's too harsh to say this to a brother, okay! He said that the male protagonist had this kind of mentality towards the female protagonist from the beginning, which made him a little uncomfortable. It would have been better to simmer the story over low heat. Of course, it was purely a personal preference. Let's throw a handful of flowers and cheers!

Not bad, the language can be reconsidered. Just put a blank line between phrases. . Collect it first. .

Damn, I actually like to read stories about the Republic of China, but I haven't seen any plots that I like. I feel like the stories about the Republic of China are really meant to be sad~ I originally wanted to write one myself, but I had already thought of the main character being a dancer, and then continued to abuse my heart and body, but I just didn't have the patience to write it down, hahaha! Come on, I'll gain weight and look! A small suggestion, it is best to have only blank lines between each paragraph. Once I see so many words together, I don't have much desire to read~~

Coming from ancient times, first of all I want to say that the title of your novel could be more attractive. When I see the actor, I usually won't name it. . I think it will definitely feel like abuse. . Also, it's very good that you can write so much, keep up the good work!

Bishui came here and asked me some textual research questions. First of all, the play "The Drunken Concubine" was very vulgar and pornographic during the Republic of China. The noble and generous look was the result of Mei Lanfang's reformation; secondly, "The Drunken Concubine" is a classic play of the Mei School, which was born out of Kunqu Opera and was formed in the 1950s; then, on the face, The application of oil paint gradually developed. During the Republic of China, the makeup on the faces of actors and actresses was light, and bright makeup became popular at least after the founding of the People's Republic of China. It was to match the stage, lights, and cameras. Finally, it can be said that it is difficult to find a way in the acting world halfway. Well, there are very few writers writing about the Republic of China. Come on, author.

Coming here from the self-recommendation post, I read the author's first chapter and have two comments. One is that some of your sentences are too long and need to be broken up in the middle. The second is that Chief Liu of the police station is too over the top == Anyone who is really capable of getting into this official position is not a fuel-efficient lamp, and he will not show off the aura of a gangster who is shameless in public...