[Quick Transmigration] Saving the Perfect Male Lead

I feel that the heroine's forgiveness of Bai Ting for wanting to kill her has nothing to do with the male counterpart. After all, the sisterhood is also the original owner's wish. But she asked the male protagonist not to pursue the case any further, so the people who died innocently before had died in vain? The heroine is not qualified to forgive Bai Ting on behalf of those people.

Gone? Are you sure?

I like to listen to the author's stories ~ but sometimes I feel that some parts are not explained clearly_(:з∠)_I can't make up my mind

Haha, is this the end? Author, come out and I promise not to beat you#

"(Quick Wear) Saving the Perfect Matching Man" Author: Yi Yiqin [Comments by Mo Mo] Hello, this is a long review of "(Quickly Wearing) Saving the Perfect Matching Man" published by Yunge Long Review Shop. I have read the author's article, and I have to say that as a V article, it does have some merits. For example, the author's plot is quite attractive, the characters are not too broken, and the plot is smooth and smooth. These points are really good. But there are also problems, let me talk about them next. First there are small issues, such as symbol issues and some person issues. As for symbols, I don't know if it's a matter of the author's habits. He always likes to use a series of periods instead of omissions. There are even a series of periods as dividing lines, and there are actually two or three periods at the end of many paragraphs. This makes the layout of the article look quite messy, and some readers will definitely think that if there are ellipses, they should always use periods instead of ellipses. This way of using symbols is really strange. There is also the issue of person. Every time the author writes about the psychological activities of the character, he always likes to write about me directly. For example, this way: "The heroine is very strange. Why is he ignoring me? What did I do wrong?" This way is to jump between the third person and the first person. It is easy to create drama and the sense of substitution will not be strong. It is better for the author to always use the third person since it is in the third person, otherwise it will be very dramatic: "The heroine is very strange, why is he ignoring her, has she done something wrong?" This method is more appropriate. The following is about the plot and character design. The problems in this area are relatively big. The author's writing style is light and should be relatively mature. But when the author wrote about the heroine, he set it up as a relatively mature (psychologically mature) girl. However, during the strategy process, through the author's psychological description of the heroine, sometimes she was very mature, and sometimes she was a bit naive, as if the heroine should have understood this problem very well, but she didn't, and she felt like a pretentious novice. Not only the heroine, but also other characters have this problem. When the author writes about the psychological activities of the characters, he should write them according to the facts. It is best not to write the psychological activities of the characters in a simple way just to be "interesting". This kind of description will only make the readers feel that the characters are strange and do not conform to the original character setting. Then there is the matter of plot. The author's plot is pretty good, quite fluent, and make sense. However, the biggest problem is that although it is smooth, it is not attractive. The author's plot is too ordinary and has no novelty, which makes readers feel uninterested while watching it. Maybe they will be interested in reading it at the beginning, but the more they look at the back, the plot remains the same, with nothing interesting, which leads to them abandoning the article after reading it. Therefore, the author should think of some plots that are different from other stories, rather than looking similar to other plots of fast-travel stories, and not having any special features. Although the author's quick-travel plot is very novel, the plot content in the strategy process is not particularly novel and not enough to attract other readers. Then I feel tired when reading the author's article. Yes, it's just exhaustion. When you watch too many similar plots, readers will only feel exhausted. In this way, even if readers finish reading, they will not be able to remember what plot they have watched. As a result, this book was submerged in many fast-travel articles, and readers forgot that they had ever read such a book. Especially when the title of your book is so common, I'm afraid those readers may not even remember the name very clearly. This is the point. The next question is the heroine's strategy. There is nothing outstanding about the heroine's strategy, but the male supporting characters still fall in love with the heroine. Is this the heroine's golden finger? The golden finger halo of the heroine who is "loved by everyone and loved by her male partner"? Although it is too harsh to say this, I will list one of the stories to illustrate it. For example, when the female protagonist conquers the school idol male partner, (and a domineering male protagonist is added), the female protagonist is a fat person. Even if she loses weight, she cannot become a beautiful woman in an instant, right? Author: You may not know that a fat person will have wrinkles on his body if he loses weight quickly, and his skin will be sagging and inelastic. Even if he loses weight, he may not be a beautiful woman. It is true that a fat person will become a beautiful woman if she loses weight. This is a matter of common sense. The author should not be a bit ignorant. This is a bit ridiculous. The main and most important problem is that the female protagonist sends messages to the male partner every day, and then the male partner falls in love with the female protagonist... This method of strategy is really a bit strange, and it is not particularly common sense. After all, as far as the author is concerned, would you, the author, have a crush on someone who sends you messages every day (similar to perverted behavior) without knowing whether he is a boy or a girl or even what he looks like? I definitely won't do it anyway. What if someone else is making fun of me? Therefore, the author needs to think more about whether the strategy is logical. This is not just this story, this is just one of them. Many other stories have very weird ways of solving them, but they are successful. The author can think carefully about whether the heroine's strategy is appropriate. Sorry, that's the way I said it, I hope the author doesn't mind. Author, keep up the good work! Come on!

Well, the author is a bit over the top, so what if the writing is elegant and the strategy is surprising? It doesn't matter how elegant the writing is if the story isn't a good story. The story of Author-chan... Is indeed not perfect. If we remember correctly, this is the first full-length novel, right? It's actually pretty good. We believe that if the author is determined to write, he will definitely be able to write what he hopes for. Because the author is determined to write well, right? But we still have that saying. Sometimes good writing does not mean a good story.

Has it been trapped? I've been waiting for the next story to be finished. I didn't expect it to be updated for so long. Fortunately, I didn't buy it.

Come on! Please update! If you give up, please tell us. We still don't want Dada to give up. After all, the novels you wrote are very good.

The quality of the scam is too bad, no matter how good it looks, I decided to give it up.

I still don't understand. I feel that a lot of things have not been explained clearly in the elves, and who sealed Puxili's memory. I feel unworthy for Ajaman. Why do I have to cling to one person for seven lives? I feel that the person Puxili's brother is waiting for is Ajaman.