One glance was all it took for time to stand still and the world to change forever!!!
I'm no good at writing blurbs. I wrote this first story a long time ago, and I'm only bringing it out now because I don't want it to die in my memory! I should also make it clear that seven years have passed, and I still haven't finished it. A lot of the feelings I had back then have changed by now!
I really like the male protagonist of this article. He is ordinary but not simple. I will try to train my heart more in the future to make his heart stronger. The female protagonist also has a good personality, she will definitely love those she cares about, and she is decisive in killing. However, there are too many male supporting characters, which makes it a bit disturbing to watch. The heroine is so smooth sailing and strong. She is a little willful in being spoiled by others, but she does not cherish the hero. Now she does not treat the hero as an equal lover, but just like a pet. She hopes that more hardships will come in the future to make the heroine cherish the hero more and understand that some people are unique existences in life. I have another suggestion. The first five chapters are really long-winded. Putting these background-like things in the text and slowly revealing them will make the text more attractive.
The subject matter is very good and the writing is also good. Of course, the emotional interaction between the male and female protagonists can be improved a bit. I am very interested in it. Come on!
I really like the male protagonist of this article. He is ordinary but not simple. I will try to train my heart more in the future to make his heart stronger. The female protagonist also has a good personality, she will definitely love those she cares about, and she is decisive in killing. However, there are too many male supporting characters, which makes it a bit disturbing to watch. The heroine is so smooth sailing and strong. She is a little willful in being spoiled by others, but she does not cherish the hero. Now she does not treat the hero as an equal lover, but just like a pet. She hopes that more hardships will come in the future to make the heroine cherish the hero more and understand that some people are unique existences in life. I have another suggestion. The first five chapters are really long-winded. Putting these background-like things in the text and slowly revealing them will make the text more attractive.
The subject matter is very good and the writing is also good. Of course, the emotional interaction between the male and female protagonists can be improved a bit. I am very interested in it. Come on!