Ito Rei finds herself in the world of Prince of Tennis, where she meets the princes of tennis. Beautiful and serene, she is about to begin a story with them. They meet and grow close in their youth, and in the end, their relationship, set against the backdrop of their wonderful youth, will be settled. Though young, they will all hold fast to their dreams and hopes, and the same goes for love.
This is planned as a comedy with an NP ending. The main characters who will end up together have been tentatively decided, though there are also some popular choices. Hope you enjoy the story, and thank you~
I support you as always, but the update is too slow!!! ~~~~(>_<)
It seems that you are not proficient enough in writing in the first person. I suggest you use the third person in your next article, and then write in the first person. This will be better. Great, hope you continue to work hard and wait for your updates!
Regarding the question of liking. You can probably describe more about the process of the two falling in love. The result will be revealed as soon as it comes out, which will make people think that it is very boring and the heroine is very slutty. So I would like to write about the process first. The process is the most important thing. From not liking it to liking it, this is what readers like.
Continue with item three. Although fan fiction will sometimes overwrite the characters, I still want to ask you to pay more attention to it. If the characters of the original work are expressed, the content of the article will be more attractive, such as Echizen's awkwardness and arrogance, and Fuji and Yukimura's evil intentions. If the characters' personalities were changed, most people would not be able to stand it anymore.
Next is the second article. Although you have done better in subsequent chapters, it is still not enough. I hope you can write more words in each chapter. You can update more slowly. It is best to keep the number of words in each chapter within 2000-3000. I have experience with this, because if you only have a few words in each chapter, it will be difficult for us as readers to go deep and appreciate the artistic conception. This is generally the case when reading articles. I feel that the number of words in each chapter is too few, and sometimes I default to the fact that the author's writing is not good, and then abandon the article. I hope you can improve it
I can't say enough about your diligence, but as a reader, I have some experience in reading articles to share with you. For the first one, you can add the word "" in front of the title. This way, readers will know that they are a fan of "" as soon as they see it, and the chance of getting in will be higher.
Well, the outline of the heroine's image is okay, but the whole article reads like a self-narration, with no emotional ups and downs, and the author's visual observation of students. . . .