The article "Green Ape" gave me the illusion of reading ancient poetry from beginning to end.
I really like authors with good writing skills. I originally wanted to say that in this market where fast-food plots dominate the market, the writing style of adults is very admirable. But when I read the end, I discovered that this novel was actually written in 2005. Sure enough, it is the style that Jinjiang crafted many years ago. "The Green Monkey" is a good article. Every sentence is carefully thought out. The writing is gorgeous and fresh, and at the same time it is used naturally and appropriately. It makes people feel like they are reading poetry.
There are many sentences in the article that make people's eyes light up. Like this sentence, "Dan Yu irritably slapped himself in the face with his palm, killing a greasy insect." After that, there was a turning point: "The next morning, rain fell and wet the flowers. Wang Zungui's yellow robe was also splashed with specks of filth." A shallow stroke, but with a cold charm, reminded me of Wang Anguo's famous saying: "The red palace and brocade are all over the ground, and the south garden was stormy last night."
It can be seen that the adults like Song poetry, especially Su Dongpo, but from the description of some paragraphs, it can be vaguely seen that the adults may also like to read foreign masterpieces. For example, this paragraph:
"When Guan Li walked into the palace hall again, the night rain was falling. Guan Li was barefoot, dragging a trail of wet water, and his steps were no longer light and graceful. It was as if three years had added the weight of 30,000 years of the universe to his back. The wind of eating and sleeping in the open air did not bring any impact to Guan Li. Despite his appearance of frosty color, his figure is more upright, his eyebrows are more graceful, and the unruly lines at the corners of his mouth are deeper. However, he is a person who carries a load, and anyone with a discerning eye can tell at a glance: this weight does not come from the body, but from the spirit. "
Although others always say that the most important element of a novel is the plot, if it is written like this and just reads the words, it will be a kind of enjoyment for the readers.
In terms of characters, Guan Li is really a wonderful person. "Guan Li was arrogant and acted wildly. He often went to the palace barefoot, wearing only a crude blue cloth coat. When he saw ministers with higher rankings than him, he would not salute according to the rules, and would often just give a slight nod." With a few words of description, coupled with the bohemian appearance when he appeared, the distinct image of an old-time artist emerged on the page.
Danyu's personality is also very interesting. "Danyu hates killing, but he just likes the peaceful appearance of birds and is fascinated by it. For Danyu, only when he sees the birds being imprisoned and unable to sing can he feel the happiness of being a free being. Only when he sees wild animals being disciplined can he feel the happiness of being a discipliner."
Needless to say, Wang is a tyrant who was high-spirited when he was young but died alone. His regrets run through the entire later period of the novel and are still heard at the end, just like the song of Guanli.
Speaking of singing, I have to mention that the best thing about "Green Monkey" is the passages that use music to communicate throughout the text.
I believe that your original inspiration came from Li Daoyuan's "The Badong Three Gorges Wu Gorge is long, and the apes cry three times and the clothes are wet with tears." Therefore, it has the transformation of the Kingdom of Shu, the singing of green apes and the music of pipe raccoons.
Like this paragraph, "That wandering song pulled the dim candlelight, the heavy curtains, and the empty eyes of people, and pulled the entire palace, the entire kingdom, and all living creatures in the heaven, earth, mountains, and rivers into the cave. It pulled the first ray of wind that opened up the floods and cleared the sky, and pulled all the birds towards the phoenix." The first sound of the song pulled the first snow of the Ten Thousand Years Jade Mountain towards it calmly and tenderly. "The description of the song is majestic and majestic, with a good blend of ancient and modern styles. More importantly, it is true, as if you can hear the song in your ears.
The passage where Guanli and Qingyuan communicate in joy has a very strong sense of imagery. "That song is so natural and emotional, so quiet and soft, like a candle in the dark night. Although it is lonely and unable to speak, the light and heat can still be felt." These few words have already made people daydream about it.
In Chapter 8, Wang asked Guan Li three questions, and Guan Li answered him with music. The description and plot design were both impressive.
Of course, "Green Monkey" becomes more exciting in the later stages, and the writing becomes smoother in the later stages. The climax, the length of the ending, and the slackness of the plot are all well controlled, and there is no hint of anticlimactic. With only 20,000 words, the writing, imagination, plot, and characters are all quite brilliant. This short story is a masterpiece.
Although looking at the time of the column, adults should give up and stop writing... But when I encounter a good article or meet a close friend, even if I can't get to know each other, I still write a long comment with both hands.
Such good writing should not be wasted. I hope this gem of your honor can be discovered and carried forward.
Thrilling, great article!
Better than many articles on this list
Where has the author gone? What a great article.
It's such a pity that such a beautiful article has been buried
Ah, has the heroine risen? Wonderful twist!
I'm sure these two have a JQ... This should be considered a pornographic pornographic article!!!
Good looking...
But why do I smell a hint of the JQ between Wang and Guanli = =
The article "Green Ape" gave me the illusion of reading ancient poetry from beginning to end. I really like authors with good writing skills. I originally wanted to say that in this market where fast-food plots dominate the market, the writing style of adults is very admirable. But when I read the end, I discovered that this novel was actually written in 2005. Sure enough, it is the style that Jinjiang crafted many years ago. "The Green Monkey" is a good article. Every sentence is carefully thought out. The writing is gorgeous and fresh, and at the same time it is used naturally and appropriately. It makes people feel like they are reading poetry. There are many sentences in the article that make people's eyes light up. Like this sentence, "Dan Yu irritably slapped himself in the face with his palm, killing a greasy insect." After that, there was a turning point: "The next morning, rain fell and wet the flowers. Wang Zungui's yellow robe was also splashed with specks of filth." A shallow stroke, but with a cold charm, reminded me of Wang Anguo's famous saying: "The red palace and brocade are all over the ground, and the south garden was stormy last night." It can be seen that the adults like Song poetry, especially Su Dongpo, but from the description of some paragraphs, it can be vaguely seen that the adults may also like to read foreign masterpieces. For example, this paragraph: "When Guan Li walked into the palace hall again, the night rain was falling. Guan Li was barefoot, dragging a trail of wet water, and his steps were no longer light and graceful. It was as if three years had added the weight of 30,000 years of the universe to his back. The wind of eating and sleeping in the open air did not bring any impact to Guan Li. Despite his appearance of frosty color, his figure is more upright, his eyebrows are more graceful, and the unruly lines at the corners of his mouth are deeper. However, he is a person who carries a load, and anyone with a discerning eye can tell at a glance: this weight does not come from the body, but from the spirit. " Although others always say that the most important element of a novel is the plot, if it is written like this and just reads the words, it will be a kind of enjoyment for the readers. In terms of characters, Guan Li is really a wonderful person. "Guan Li was arrogant and acted wildly. He often went to the palace barefoot, wearing only a crude blue cloth coat. When he saw ministers with higher rankings than him, he would not salute according to the rules, and would often just give a slight nod." With a few words of description, coupled with the bohemian appearance when he appeared, the distinct image of an old-time artist emerged on the page. Danyu's personality is also very interesting. "Danyu hates killing, but he just likes the peaceful appearance of birds and is fascinated by it. For Danyu, only when he sees the birds being imprisoned and unable to sing can he feel the happiness of being a free being. Only when he sees wild animals being disciplined can he feel the happiness of being a discipliner." Needless to say, Wang is a tyrant who was high-spirited when he was young but died alone. His regrets run through the entire later period of the novel and are still heard at the end, just like the song of Guanli. Speaking of singing, I have to mention that the best thing about "Green Monkey" is the passages that use music to communicate throughout the text. I believe that your original inspiration came from Li Daoyuan's "The Badong Three Gorges Wu Gorge is long, and the apes cry three times and the clothes are wet with tears." Therefore, it has the transformation of the Kingdom of Shu, the singing of green apes and the music of pipe raccoons. Like this paragraph, "That wandering song pulled the dim candlelight, the heavy curtains, and the empty eyes of people, and pulled the entire palace, the entire kingdom, and all living creatures in the heaven, earth, mountains, and rivers into the cave. It pulled the first ray of wind that opened up the floods and cleared the sky, and pulled all the birds towards the phoenix." The first sound of the song pulled the first snow of the Ten Thousand Years Jade Mountain towards it calmly and tenderly. "The description of the song is majestic and majestic, with a good blend of ancient and modern styles. More importantly, it is true, as if you can hear the song in your ears. The passage where Guanli and Qingyuan communicate in joy has a very strong sense of imagery. "That song is so natural and emotional, so quiet and soft, like a candle in the dark night. Although it is lonely and unable to speak, the light and heat can still be felt." These few words have already made people daydream about it. In Chapter 8, Wang asked Guan Li three questions, and Guan Li answered him with music. The description and plot design were both impressive. Of course, "Green Monkey" becomes more exciting in the later stages, and the writing becomes smoother in the later stages. The climax, the length of the ending, and the slackness of the plot are all well controlled, and there is no hint of anticlimactic. With only 20,000 words, the writing, imagination, plot, and characters are all quite brilliant. This short story is a masterpiece. Although looking at the time of the column, adults should give up and stop writing... But when I encounter a good article or meet a close friend, even if I can't get to know each other, I still write a long comment with both hands. Such good writing should not be wasted. I hope this gem of your honor can be discovered and carried forward.
Thrilling, great article!
Better than many articles on this list
Where has the author gone? What a great article.
It's such a pity that such a beautiful article has been buried
Ah, has the heroine risen? Wonderful twist!
I'm sure these two have a JQ... This should be considered a pornographic pornographic article!!!
Good looking... But why do I smell a hint of the JQ between Wang and Guanli = =