Atop the snowy peak, they first exchanged matching mandarin-duck tokens.
I kept you company through music and wine.
A beautiful woman, graceful as a fox,
I would share a bridal gown with you and grow old at your side.
Years later, he came looking for her, painting the past in ink.
She smiled and said that even a mended broken mirror still bears a crack.
He was desolate, only then realizing he'd wronged her and lost a lifetime with her.
- Gong Xie Shu
They had been closer than family, but one night's mistake changed everything.
Later, he left her a letter, saying he was willing to serve her as a subject on her own land.
- Jin Cheng
She and he had endured countless battles together.
She said she wanted to sit with him and chat about everyday life.
As the sun bled into the horizon, he said he'd be the trim on her wedding dress.
Later, on the Bridge of Helplessness, they drank Meng Po's soup as the belated wine of their wedding ceremony, downing it in one gulp.
- Chu Yan
This is my first time writing, so it's not very good. If you don't like it, please don't flame me. I hope someone will leave a comment. I'll make improvements~~...
Great, great. The author must have a strong literary foundation. I admire you. I just want some of the content to be so funny, haha.
Flower gate??? Why not impressive? Free to watch? This word is so modern!! The author has a strong foundation in writing, but the language lacks polish. Are you telling a story? When telling stories, pay more attention to plot. . Simple and clear language is better. . I can't help but talk nonsense again. Well. . . In short, at the end, I was looking forward to the male protagonist, Chu Yan? Is it a fox? Why are there so many characters? It's a bit confusing.
Well, after reading this chapter, I felt that the language was quite verbose and not fluent. "Outsiders are not allowed in. Those who leave the door are outsiders, and any offenders will be killed." This has always been the principle respected by Shenghua Sect. In this sentence, do you think the sentence in the middle does not match the previous one? Why does it feel weird? Also, what is the heroine's name? The two names are a bit confusing. . My brain can't make it up. And the description of the heroine's appearance makes people feel that she looks like a monkey. Don't be angry, author, this is the image in your mind. "She was wearing thin clothes and her body was also thin. She could faintly see her shoulder bones through her sleeves, and they were as thin as a knife. Her hair, which reached her waist, was untied." This heroine is really not beautiful. "The two of them were in a flirtatious pose, and the atmosphere was tense." Linger? Posture? Uh, something doesn't make sense. . . . Revise the first chapter well, make the language more concise and make the conflicts clear. Let readers see the desire, the desire to read. Ai. . In fact, I also have a lot of problems with writing, which I'm sorry to tell you. I just talked about my feelings after reading it from the perspective of a reader. I sincerely hope that the author can write it well. I have just written the article, and I can see the potential. It is a potential stock. . Just persist.
Sprinkle flowers. . Dear, is this your first time writing an article? Not bad! Come on~
It is very difficult to grow old hair. I hope I can grow old together with Jun Hongzhuang.