The title is beautiful and has artistic conception
I quite like the writing style. The plot is quite rich and the setting is also good. I will follow this article~
However, it is recommended that the author bury more foreshadowing [it is just the icing on the cake, not that the author is not doing a good job in this regard] because I feel that the subsequent plot will be very ups and downs.
"You can actually persuade Yu Ning to want to see her." [Zhu Chong: Want → Look]
There is also the last paragraph, "But it is such a man, but he speaks such sonorous words." Why is there no more after that?
Damn possessiveness. . . . . . Yu Ning was not qualified to say that. . . . Hanhua is so stupid. . . . . .
Yu Ning is a scumbag!!!! I feel sorry for Zi Gu and Han Hua
The author's writing is pretty good. The light ancient style is my favorite tone.
The title is beautiful and has artistic conception
I quite like the writing style. The plot is quite rich and the setting is also good. I will follow this article~ However, it is recommended that the author bury more foreshadowing [it is just the icing on the cake, not that the author is not doing a good job in this regard] because I feel that the subsequent plot will be very ups and downs. "You can actually persuade Yu Ning to want to see her." [Zhu Chong: Want → Look] There is also the last paragraph, "But it is such a man, but he speaks such sonorous words." Why is there no more after that?
Damn possessiveness. . . . . . Yu Ning was not qualified to say that. . . . Hanhua is so stupid. . . . . .
Yu Ning is a scumbag!!!! I feel sorry for Zi Gu and Han Hua
The author's writing is pretty good. The light ancient style is my favorite tone.