When we were young, we did crazy things and dreamed impossible dreams. There were plenty of shouts scattered by the wind, and dreams that never had a chance to grow up. Years later, when we enter our ordinary futures, we have nothing to say about that blood of youth, full of restlessness, anxiety, and confusion. Yet in the silence, we suddenly feel a muscle twitch at our temples. The male lead, Ye Liming, is a passionate young man who met the heroine as a teenager after cheating on an exam. Their lives, both shaped by complicated family backgrounds, became intertwined from then on. The long passage of time and the cold realities of life have etched our laments and hopes into the faint and deep footprints they left behind. Youth is as brief as midsummer. In the end, I went home alone.
You have to be more diligent, otherwise, it will be difficult to follow It's the same sentence again, revise the text a bit, make the sentences into empty lines... Well written but looks too tired
A very ordinary life, and then tell extraordinary stories. Like this feeling. [There is a punctuation error in the third paragraph, and a word error in the sixth paragraph. Hey, I always have this kind of obsessive-compulsive disorder when reading novels. Please don't mind.
It doesn't matter whether you have a blank sentence or a line. I look tired, but I patiently listened to what you said. It's very touching! Bits and pieces of life scenes seem to be reappearing in front of you, but I am looking forward to the development of the characters below, hoping that it will not end with the bottom of the story. .
I can say, dear, this writing style can be published by a magazine or something. It's really very classy. This description is simple, vivid and appropriate.