A story about a man with a blank past and a child, who tends his own little patch of land and runs a yin-yang shop, eventually becoming a tycoon (not really).
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VIP Notice: This story will become a paid novel on September 15, with three chapters released that day. I'm incredibly grateful to all the girls for your support over such a long time. I hope you'll continue to support me in the future... *bows in thanks*... kisses and hugs...
I hope those who pirate or repost my work will take a six-month break while I'm releasing paid chapters... I update daily, with occasional ten-thousand-word updates.
Theme:
I'm speechless. A wooden comb is just a wooden comb. How can there be such a thing as a plastic wooden comb...
Since I knew it was important, I changed it out without even asking what it was. I already knew how to ask about other things, but I didn't know how to ask about this? Author, where is the protagonist's IQ?
After reading a few chapters, I was filled with all kinds of questions, what happened to the man who killed the hero, how did the Yin Yang store come from, why did the crazy woman go crazy, who was the old man, who was the apprentice, what was the relationship between Hao Yun and the living soul, and what kind of story the fox seemed to have later. Did the author just put it here for us to guess? Isn't the relationship between so many characters clear? It's so confusing to read, it's really painful! !
It feels pretentious and stupid at the same time. The author tried hard to write a story that was light and smart but turned out to be so messed up that I was really drunk. There were a lot of inconsistencies and foreshadowing. I forgot about the master and so on. There were a lot of things that were not explained to me. The protagonist suddenly knew that he could die by poking a hole with his hand. I kept reading until I wanted to see the explanation and the result was inexplicable. It was so uncomfortable.
The male protagonist is mentally retarded. People are clearly trying to capture him, but he still doesn't run away when he has the chance╭(╯ε╰)╮
There's no need to talk about this relationship all the time. One moment it feels like these three people are supporting each other, and the next moment it's revealed that they are actually very alienated from each other, which makes people inexplicable, and the characters are completely broken.
Come on, don't disconnect
Is this Xiaofu's mother?
Your grandma is a bitch. This novel has been published for two years and it has been a year. It is updated every now and then and then stops for a month or two or three or four months. Your grandma is the author, do you have any professional ethics?
The male protagonist is too weak and has no self-awareness to watch.
I'm speechless. A wooden comb is just a wooden comb. How can there be such a thing as a plastic wooden comb...
Since I knew it was important, I changed it out without even asking what it was. I already knew how to ask about other things, but I didn't know how to ask about this? Author, where is the protagonist's IQ?
After reading a few chapters, I was filled with all kinds of questions, what happened to the man who killed the hero, how did the Yin Yang store come from, why did the crazy woman go crazy, who was the old man, who was the apprentice, what was the relationship between Hao Yun and the living soul, and what kind of story the fox seemed to have later. Did the author just put it here for us to guess? Isn't the relationship between so many characters clear? It's so confusing to read, it's really painful! !
It feels pretentious and stupid at the same time. The author tried hard to write a story that was light and smart but turned out to be so messed up that I was really drunk. There were a lot of inconsistencies and foreshadowing. I forgot about the master and so on. There were a lot of things that were not explained to me. The protagonist suddenly knew that he could die by poking a hole with his hand. I kept reading until I wanted to see the explanation and the result was inexplicable. It was so uncomfortable.
The male protagonist is mentally retarded. People are clearly trying to capture him, but he still doesn't run away when he has the chance╭(╯ε╰)╮
There's no need to talk about this relationship all the time. One moment it feels like these three people are supporting each other, and the next moment it's revealed that they are actually very alienated from each other, which makes people inexplicable, and the characters are completely broken.
Come on, don't disconnect
Is this Xiaofu's mother?
Your grandma is a bitch. This novel has been published for two years and it has been a year. It is updated every now and then and then stops for a month or two or three or four months. Your grandma is the author, do you have any professional ethics?
The male protagonist is too weak and has no self-awareness to watch.