This is a heartwarming story about a quirky girl and a pineapple-haired boy who bicker and fall in love~
Yui of Varia is so clever. She infiltrates Tsuna's family and manages to avoid the chairman time and again.
Does she make a habit of insulting the pineapple boy?!
Mukuro Rokudo: Kufufufu~ Yui, I'd really like to educate you myself.
X-dad: Then I'll leave that piece of trash to you.
Yui: I refuse to go home with that nutcase who bursts into laughter at the drop of a hat. - -
Huh? Then why do I wake up every morning to find a pineapple lying beside me?
Original female protagonist, not a transmigrate story. Pairing: Mukuro Rokudo.
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Completed works: The Beloved Doll Girl (Hibari BG)
A Sweetheart for You [Esports]
Theme: Don't go home with a pineapple who laughs at the drop of a hat
Is the heroine really from Varian? Are you sure it's not a joke?
The heroine is really a bit stupid and very foolhardy
Valia's heart is not that weak, right? They definitely let their guard down when they were fighting.
Xanxus If you stop others from confessing, you will be drowned
Is it really okay to hand out dog food to the Chairman like this? 233333333
Hello, this is Jiji. I'm a little late in commenting because I've been busy with various things, plus all kinds of dilly-dallying. I'm really sorry QAQ... Heheheheheguo=v=, why don't I let Jiji give you a healthy and safe long review~
① I don't comment much on writing. My requirements for writing are not particularly high, and of course they are not very low. Although your writing is not that great, it is still pretty good =v=. At least I think it is pretty good, but there is still room for improvement.
②Six Paths Skeleton Lord is so evil and charming (so soft) as soon as he appears. He is so handsome ← I feel that the writing is great. I never knew that I could use those words to describe Liu Dao Skeleton... But I personally prefer Bai Lanjun =3=
③The heroine's setting is also plump and her personality is very cute. Overall, she is a pretty cute girl, but the setting is not very special. If some more interesting settings can be added, I believe the heroine will be even cuter. Hehehehe. ↑Okay, maybe it's because I'm more into cute and weird things =v=
④ By the way, please praise your copywriting. It's very concise, clear and clean. It's quite cute. I just like the simplicity!
⑤The characters are not particularly broken. Generally speaking, QUQ is maintained very well. I personally feel that the degree of restoration is very high. As a fan author, you have done a good job in writing this. It seems that you have put real effort into it.
④The plot is also very interesting, and the main line is very clear, but it can be better if the description of the scenery is strengthened. Of course, there is no need to describe too much. At least I still feel that too much will make it irritating, but proper description will make it look very powerful.
⑤The descriptions of Bell and Mr. Liu Daosu are very good. As the second male lead, Bell instantly recovered from the state of deep ice after being kissed on the cheek by the heroine... Hahahaha Bell, are you a pervert, you cute little thing! I said, how about the idea of bringing Bell and Liu Daogui together! The idea of letting the boys kiss him together when Bell goes crazy again is a great idea (don't wait, don't pay attention to me←Honestly, the adult emotional scenes are the best written, seeping out little by little =v=
⑥More than two people are considered a group gathering, so it can't be too cute_(:з∠)_Especially when A Gang says it hahaha! I have always felt that Skylark's aura is obviously super strong, and I can't understand why I like Skylark's suffering! (Crying)
⑦To be honest, I don't really like novels that follow the original TV plot. Of course, it doesn't mean that I can't follow it. Although you also have a lot of original works interspersed in it, I still hope that there will be more original works, because the original TV plot will make those readers who have watched Tutoring many times very miserable. QAQ, because compared to watching you describe the original TV plot, they will prefer to see more adult cute originals. Of course, it is also very important to be original and not conflict with the TV plot. I think adults have obviously achieved this =v=(←This cannot be generalized, although I am not sure whether any readers will like this genre.
⑧Then finally, I hope the author will continue to work hard~ The overall evaluation of the article is very good. As a fan, it is also worthy of recommendation. The writing is also very cute. Of course, there is room for improvement and progress. Come on, adults, move forward and fight!
——Jiuge Changpingpu Chicken
Kawaii Yui-chan's first kiss is gone:) I really miss her~
I just had time to read the update today, T^T
Is this the rhythm of the ending? Dear~
Sprinkle flowers~
By the way, will Yui herself come back? Isn't this how it goes? ! ! !
Is the heroine really from Varian? Are you sure it's not a joke?
The heroine is really a bit stupid and very foolhardy
Valia's heart is not that weak, right? They definitely let their guard down when they were fighting.
Xanxus If you stop others from confessing, you will be drowned
Is it really okay to hand out dog food to the Chairman like this? 233333333
Hello, this is Jiji. I'm a little late in commenting because I've been busy with various things, plus all kinds of dilly-dallying. I'm really sorry QAQ... Heheheheheguo=v=, why don't I let Jiji give you a healthy and safe long review~ ① I don't comment much on writing. My requirements for writing are not particularly high, and of course they are not very low. Although your writing is not that great, it is still pretty good =v=. At least I think it is pretty good, but there is still room for improvement. ②Six Paths Skeleton Lord is so evil and charming (so soft) as soon as he appears. He is so handsome ← I feel that the writing is great. I never knew that I could use those words to describe Liu Dao Skeleton... But I personally prefer Bai Lanjun =3= ③The heroine's setting is also plump and her personality is very cute. Overall, she is a pretty cute girl, but the setting is not very special. If some more interesting settings can be added, I believe the heroine will be even cuter. Hehehehe. ↑Okay, maybe it's because I'm more into cute and weird things =v= ④ By the way, please praise your copywriting. It's very concise, clear and clean. It's quite cute. I just like the simplicity! ⑤The characters are not particularly broken. Generally speaking, QUQ is maintained very well. I personally feel that the degree of restoration is very high. As a fan author, you have done a good job in writing this. It seems that you have put real effort into it. ④The plot is also very interesting, and the main line is very clear, but it can be better if the description of the scenery is strengthened. Of course, there is no need to describe too much. At least I still feel that too much will make it irritating, but proper description will make it look very powerful. ⑤The descriptions of Bell and Mr. Liu Daosu are very good. As the second male lead, Bell instantly recovered from the state of deep ice after being kissed on the cheek by the heroine... Hahahaha Bell, are you a pervert, you cute little thing! I said, how about the idea of bringing Bell and Liu Daogui together! The idea of letting the boys kiss him together when Bell goes crazy again is a great idea (don't wait, don't pay attention to me←Honestly, the adult emotional scenes are the best written, seeping out little by little =v= ⑥More than two people are considered a group gathering, so it can't be too cute_(:з∠)_Especially when A Gang says it hahaha! I have always felt that Skylark's aura is obviously super strong, and I can't understand why I like Skylark's suffering! (Crying) ⑦To be honest, I don't really like novels that follow the original TV plot. Of course, it doesn't mean that I can't follow it. Although you also have a lot of original works interspersed in it, I still hope that there will be more original works, because the original TV plot will make those readers who have watched Tutoring many times very miserable. QAQ, because compared to watching you describe the original TV plot, they will prefer to see more adult cute originals. Of course, it is also very important to be original and not conflict with the TV plot. I think adults have obviously achieved this =v=(←This cannot be generalized, although I am not sure whether any readers will like this genre. ⑧Then finally, I hope the author will continue to work hard~ The overall evaluation of the article is very good. As a fan, it is also worthy of recommendation. The writing is also very cute. Of course, there is room for improvement and progress. Come on, adults, move forward and fight! ——Jiuge Changpingpu Chicken
Kawaii Yui-chan's first kiss is gone:) I really miss her~
I just had time to read the update today, T^T Is this the rhythm of the ending? Dear~
Sprinkle flowers~ By the way, will Yui herself come back? Isn't this how it goes? ! ! !
Sprinkle flowers