After one drunken night, Ye Zhi seemed to have gotten herself into terrifying trouble: she was dragged into a horror game.
She didn't know if the game could ever end, if she could return to the familiar place she came from when it did, or if she would still be herself when she got back. Perhaps her humanity would already be gone, leaving her a walking corpse.
Surrounded by fear, despair, and darkness, she didn't know when she might see hope, or what hope even was. There was always something terrifying among the people around her. Who was it? You, you, or him?
It's interesting, but what's up with the first person in the opening paragraph? Uh... Then it would be better if each paragraph is appropriately empty.