[The Grave Robbers' Chronicles BG] The Game

The story is OK, but the characters' behavior is too blunt and obvious. Even a careless reader like me can spot it. There is no sense of surprise. I hope the author will put more effort into the characters' behavior. Come on!

The writing is good, but I feel like the plot is a bit delayed and there are too many details.

It's a rare little novel, I'll give it a thumbs up, it's well written, keep up the good work and don't be fooled. . .