The Flute's Song Breaks, Its Embers Turning to Ash

The literary talent is very good and the plot gives people space to write their own. Overall it is very good.

The writing is so good, even though I don't have a lot of body-breaking candy, I still like it~

To be honest, I really like this story. The writing is beautiful, the emotions are real, and it is very comfortable to read. If we want to talk about the shortcomings, it is that it focuses on emotional description and neglects the plot narrative. Important plots such as breaking the formation, counterattack, retreating troops, and fake death are all mentioned in one stroke. Although I understand what is going on, it still seems unclear. And with a length of less than 20,000 words, it is still difficult to accommodate the background of a family, country, and world. I think this length is more appropriate for pure romance. If the background is larger, I will have to expand it to a full length~ But overall I think it's pretty good. Come on, author.

It ended like this, I thought there would be more twists and turns~~~I didn't expect a lot of torture~~

It's so short... Please write more

I'm happy to see the update~~

It ends so quickly. I don't want it to be a tragedy. I feel like the idea is quite smooth. Could there be more? It would be a pity.

I am Fu Xiaole, and I am here to support you. Hehe, I hope that the young master will continue to be weak. He should be very desperate and feel that he has no worries after completing his mission.

Sit back and wait for the beauty to be abused~Come on~

Recommended by a friend, keep it first without reading, but flowers are a must. Thank you for opening another pit that makes us excited.