[Entertainment Industry] Two Little Monsters

First of all, as a brother who has only been a fan of HOT and Shinhwa, Obasan has no opinions on the male protagonist and his teammates described in the article. (Because I don't know or understand Obasan at all, so I am not qualified to beep..._(:з∠)_ If I want to praise the author, I am the old aunt who stayed at the end! Laughter) Secondly, I saw some comments saying that the author ruined the game. I feel the same way! But this is not Honkai. I personally think that this is just that the author did not grasp the main attributes of the character Huan, so she "floated" and lost her true character. There are a thousand versions of Hamlet in the minds of a thousand people, so as long as the author grasps the important and main attributes of the character, it is generally difficult to make it collapse beyond recognition. Again, I haven't had time to read the article after entering V. If I only talk about the previous part, the author has the following points to pay attention to: 1. The plot is loose; 2. The main line is unclear; 3. The description of the situation is weak; 4. The expression is scattered [The author has many scenes that are very explosive. Unfortunately, my writing skills are a little weak, so I feel a little confused and panicked in my expression. It seems that I want to write them all in one breath, so I ignore the key points! ! ! Most of the emotional interactions between the characters are well written, but it seems a little dull because of the drag on the expression. Finally, the old aunt guessed that the author should still be a young girl, but it can be seen from the text that the author still paid attention to accumulate, give you a thumbs up! No matter how many people like this article, discard it, or criticize it, I hope that the author will not TJ and insist on finishing it, and that it will not be unfinished! Don't update every month or every year, as this can easily lead to loss of ideas and inspiration! I am looking forward to the completion of your article, and will seriously buy the V part to watch it after it is completed. Please keep up the good work, author! ~\\(≧▽≦)/~

Now Qing Shui also wants to drink, eh?

Abuse the water meter, abuse gd! ! !

Haha, it's a sofa. Take your seat first

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Damn, I can read your article. I was scared to death yesterday. What happened to your article? Fortunately, I came up today so I can watch it. Give you a thumbs up

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What about the promised next chapter? Dear~ It was wonderful as promised~

It's really good to just grab your wife and take the kids to meet the mother and so on~

This is the first time I read an article in this style, and it feels very novel. Come on, author~