A Chance Encounter

It's a bit like a novel written by Cen Kailun before. The heroine's name is Rourou or something~~

The plot is smooth, down-to-earth, and the writing is mature. It might be better if the background introduction could be blended in a little more and the plot would be faster.

The writing is very real, the psychological transformation has emotions and reasons, and the logic is clear. Continue to pay attention!!!

I found a new article, so happy. It's not long, leave a comment. First of all, the cover is very beautiful. I couldn't help but admire it. It's really beautiful. Secondly, the writing is more literary and artistic. This is my first time reading it, girl, and I didn't understand it. Looking again, I understand that it is about the heroine's views on love in several age groups, but since Xiao Chi put these sentences in the copy, it means that this may be an important clue to the article, so I started to read it for the third time and saw the last sentence, "Although the encounter is so long, as long as I can walk with you forever, it will be worth it." (Quoted from the original text) I thought it was the blind date man in the previous sentence! I was stunned for a moment. It shouldn't be so silly. I thought Xiao Chi was talking about the male protagonist, or the male protagonist was actually the man on the blind date. You can change it here, but it won't be good if it causes confusion. The overall impression is that the copy is quite long and you have to read it several times to understand the effect Xiao Chi wants to express. I read the article on a tablet, which was okay, but when I read it on a computer, it was really bad. If it had this effect from the beginning, I would not have the patience to read it three times, so I suggest you make the font size slightly larger. The first chapter starts with "Reading". Sister, I have to praise it again, it is really literary and artistic. Then when I saw the sentence "Don't go with the secular world, we must get out of the mud without being stained, clean the ripples without being evil." I kept feeling ashamed. Girl, I am a student and I often do this. Taking the lead in doing it is simply the filth of filths. Intuitive. However, from the side view, Xiao Chi's positioning in shaping the heroine is very clear, which left a deep impression on me, but it lacks some cuteness. At the end, the heroine concluded that she was a nymphomaniac? I only saw that the girl was very nervous, and she seemed a little better off than seeing her, but I didn't think she was a nymphomaniac. After reading the third chapter, I realized that the heroine had a crush on Tao Mu. I think it would be better to explain it a little bit before. The second chapter specifically talks about the man sitting next to me. It looks like he is not the male protagonist. Could it be that he is the third or fourth male? Chapter 3: Mom equals old lady? This title doesn't seem appropriate for my age, or are there actually two people here? In Chapter 4, the male protagonist finally appeared, but it seemed a bit bland. If he hadn't said his name, the girl would have thought it was just another A, B, C and D. Chapter 5: Friends complain and meet the male protagonist again, still with a child. In Chapter 6, the male protagonist said, "I'm going to sell lottery tickets today." He made a typo, and then the male protagonist was moved. To tell you the truth, I am also a new author. In the past few days, I have been reading review articles again and again, hoping to learn something from them to revise my own article. I have to say that Xiao Chi has the most room for improvement among the many new authors I have seen. After six whole chapters, the plot basically has no ups and downs, just like drinking plain water, which is not conducive to accumulating readers. Furthermore, Xiao Chi's writing needs to be strengthened and the narrative is a bit messy. The sixth chapter is the best, but that's probably because of the newcomer. I believe that as long as Xiao Chi persists, he will get better and better.

Come to keep warm, la la la

It would be nice if the big paragraphs could be more clear. There are no blank lines and the words feel a bit dense. The writing is very good. Keep writing~

The content of one chapter is very rich, but I just felt that there wasn't much information. I read most of it and couldn't figure out where the heroine was hurting.

I also like my writing style~~Haha~It seems that I need to work harder~~~Standard style~~