[One Piece] The Years We Shared (GL)

It is indeed a sweet article ~ and it is short and concise [what a strange description... Hey! Suitable for people like me who are anxious and impatient, who have been tortured both physically and mentally in the third dimension or the second dimension. Well~ although I prefer short articles, Xikasi... This one is too short! Exist! No! Pass! Addiction! Ah! Sometimes you may even have the illusion of "Is it possible that I still haven't seen several pages?" It always feels like the turnaround is so quick, and I look forward to you having time to start writing []

It's sweet, it would be better if it was a long story. Thank you very much, author

Ahhh, I have watched it many times, but every time I open it again, I am still so sweet~

Mmm~ give this chapter a score

Here I come! I've kept you waiting for a long time =w= I'll just talk about it and you can take a look~ I feel that writing such a short story is still a bit too cramped. After reading it, I feel that the emotional change between the two sisters is a bit too sudden. Of course, you indicated gl in the title. I read it with the mentality that they are a couple from the beginning, which is acceptable. But if you look at it normally, the first three chapters are just about the two sisters growing up. The gentle elder sister loves and cares for her younger sister, and the cute younger sister loves her elder sister very much. What a warm and harmonious pair of good sisters! Why does it turn into so much adultery as soon as you wake up in Chapter 4?! Even if you say this is GL's world view, that's too much. . Strange! (Covering face) Also, you think Robin is a bit broken. I re-read it, and I can't say exactly where. Anyway, it feels strange, probably in Chapter 3. I don't know what Robin should be like here, but it shouldn't feel like this. Anyway, I don't know her as well as you do, so you can figure it out yourself. That's pretty much it. . Overall, it's pretty good =w= (Last sentence, I still prefer your compositions, which are more atmospheric. Writing novels feels like you have a girlish personality, haha. It's a little too soft and not full enough (maybe because of the length))

Great~ I decided to pursue it~