"I still miss the deepest thorn you left behind."
This is a heartwarming story with romance, melodrama, and a touch of literary flair.
A story about a sweet, scatterbrained girl and a cold, proud elite who spend years tangled up in each other's lives.
On her eighth birthday, Sen Xia meets Cheng Shaogong, who is staying at her family's home. She gradually falls for the aloof boy.
Years later, they meet again. Her childhood friend has become a powerful young heir, ignoring her confession while beautiful women flock around him.
She doesn't mind his coldness or distance. She is happy just staying by his side. She has no idea that her tenderness has moved Shen Yiqi, who is close to Cheng Shaogong.
Only after losing her again does he regret it. "I just didn't get the chance to admit it in time."
Looking down on the world, she has become a distant, polite stranger.
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Cheng Shaogong: "I won't do that again." He paused for a moment. "Never."
Sen Xia: "He's built a wall inside my heart. No one else can get in now."
Shen Yiqi: "Even the most impregnable wall will be worn down by time."
I'm not rambling, really. Rolling around on the floor, begging for favorites, long comments, and motivation to write =.=
There'll be melodrama, there'll be steamy scenes, and there'll definitely be plenty of points to criticize and moments that tug at your heartstrings.
Good stories are all revised into shape.
Please don't hold back on the flowers and bricks.
It starts a little slowly, but I'll keep updating daily, so feel free to dive in.
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If it's not your thing, that's okay too. You're still welcome to tell me what you think~
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Leave notice: I'm revising a short story lately, so updates to the novel will pause for a little while, but I'll be back soon.
I've been a little tired of reading novels recently, so I'm reviewing this article here before I've even finished reading it. It's really a bit unkind, but I can't help but say it. Just looking at the writing style of this chapter, it is fresh and simple, like a faint scent of jasmine lingering on the lips and cheeks, making people want to take a deep breath. I like to read and pay attention to detailed descriptions in novels. Otherwise, I feel that the text is extremely empty and immature, and I have no desire to continue reading. I think Lan Chen's article is pretty good, keep up the good work!!!
If life is just like the first meeting, what's the matter? The autumn wind is sad and the fan is painted
Doesn't Cheng have a fiancée? It wouldn't be kind to entangle with the heroine anymore!
I hope that since the heroine has lost her memory, she will not think of the person named Cheng! He is already engaged. Although he may not be able to let go of the heroine, it does not affect his life at all! Support the heroine and Shen! Come on!
The title and the first chapter were still in my mind after I closed the webpage like I was possessed, so I opened the collection again.
May the time be gentle. This name is very touching. The most beautiful time is not as beautiful as the gentle time. We were still young at that time. Please continue writing and let's work hard together. Finally, I wish you a happy new year and collect it.
I'm a little excited. I won't comment on your article for now. The wedge gives me a smell that I like. The key question is, dear! I like Holy Legend and I like xxxholic more, please hook up!
Sprinkle flowers. Has the male protagonist been interested in the female protagonist since he was a child?
Reading the author's article, how can I put it, it is really super healing. The interaction between Cheng Shaogong and Sen Xia is really heart-warming. Drinking youthful love at a young age is like a cup of milk tea, sweet but with an aftertaste. I really like the beginning of the author's flashback. Senxia went to pick up a bead but fell into the valley. Her life and death were unknown. It sets up suspense and foreshadowing for the rest of the story. If possible, I really want to travel with you all the time. It doesn't really matter what the scenery is like. What matters is that you are by my side. I like this sentence very much. It is very healing and sad. It instantly touched the artistic youth deep in my heart. However, the author's article is really slow to gain traction. Please read the following sentence. That is to say, only write things that readers will find exciting, and strive to have explosive points and highlights every two or three chapters to attract them. If the plot lasts more than three chapters, the reader will start to lose focus, and if the plot exceeds five chapters, the reader will tire. [This paragraph is quoted from Long Kong] So orz... I'm sorry, author. I really started to lose focus after watching it halfway through. The plot developed too slowly. Although the tone is not poor, the plot really seems to be stating one thing, and the tone is still CCTV News Network! ←As a voice control, at least I can still listen. How did the author do it? He wrote ten chapters in one boy!!! Dear, this is not a rebirth article. You don't need to change a lot of things when you were a child!!! The most important thing is that the development of the heroine and the hero... Orz is a complete mess, and you can't write anything else at this age!!! In fact, the beautiful memories of childhood and youth can be used as narration! Using a certain time as an insertion point, it tells the story of the encounter between Sen Xia and Cheng Shaogong and a series of things that happened. The copywriting is obviously pretty good, and what I want to read is the things described in the copywriting. You gave me a series of foreshadowings, but I'm still confused!!! Chapter 10, I finally saw the author saying that Cheng Shaogong is finally growing up, orz... I have lost all patience... Although I know that the subsequent development should be very pure and interesting, I can't stand it anymore. Continuing to complain about other things, please segment and ask for blank lines! It is recommended that the author leave a blank line between paragraphs, and control each paragraph to about three or four rows or one or two rows. Mixing long and short paragraphs will be more pleasing to the eye, and the layout will look better. Once again, I emphasize: a sadistic meme can attract more attention than a short period of tenderness! A twist and turn can increase the charm of an article more than a slow period of time. Farming articles, people use all their golden fingers to be very good~ Even reading farming articles is very refreshing. The author's article is just telling a good story~ but it cannot give readers a deep sense of empathy. This writing method is not good. However, you can still see the author's intentions from the article, and the writing style is pretty good. The first chapter really touched me. Oh, my artistic little heart. But I have a trembling heart. I believe that the author can write better and better, and the next article may make great progress. Mr. Bishui Vest will comment, please take the order.
Gu Liang's writing is too healing, right? From the skin to the bones, orz's warm writing instantly healed me, but why should I write a long review? I love you, the author of orz, and I love the healing system, but it is said that later... Be careful that the contrast ratio is too big to make fun of you!