As a student party member and a reserve army of rotten girls in the motherland, I have also written novels, including palace novels, urban novels, interstellar novels, and apocalyptic novels... The longest of them was more than 200,000 words, and was published on □, but in the end I couldn't stick to it because of the evil homework. I first suggested that Huan Da finish the novel before the winter vacation started. This is a lesson learned in blood and tears!
Next, judging from my experience, you should not leave too many clues in the first chapter. For example, the idea that the long soul is a sword of revenge can be revealed to the readers little by little in the following chapters: Oh, it turns out that the long soul represents revenge! This can also take the opportunity to interact.
Also, there is absolutely no need to incorporate the outline into the text! For example, Qiyanlou can have a side story! What a great theme...
Finally, let me complain, why would Mao still smile calmly when Nanzhu was wiped out? This is unscientific, and what kind of trouble is caused by setting the cliff jumping route in advance? It will scare our family ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
As a student party member and a reserve army of rotten girls in the motherland, I have also written novels, including palace novels, urban novels, interstellar novels, and apocalyptic novels... The longest of them was more than 200,000 words, and was published on □, but in the end I couldn't stick to it because of the evil homework. I first suggested that Huan Da finish the novel before the winter vacation started. This is a lesson learned in blood and tears! Next, judging from my experience, you should not leave too many clues in the first chapter. For example, the idea that the long soul is a sword of revenge can be revealed to the readers little by little in the following chapters: Oh, it turns out that the long soul represents revenge! This can also take the opportunity to interact. Also, there is absolutely no need to incorporate the outline into the text! For example, Qiyanlou can have a side story! What a great theme... Finally, let me complain, why would Mao still smile calmly when Nanzhu was wiped out? This is unscientific, and what kind of trouble is caused by setting the cliff jumping route in advance? It will scare our family ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!