A Daddy
Yang Xi has always wanted to be a daddy.
In that high-tech era, his wish never came true.
He never expected that
in this prehistoric society,
he would actually hit the jackpot.
He really is a daddy in every sense of the word.
There is clearly only one little baby,
and even if you count the other one as a little kid,
that big, strapping fellow
surely doesn't count, right?
But
why do they all need to be fed…
This story is written in plain language, with no flowery prose or extraordinary experiences. It's simply a straightforward account of everyday life, as bland as water.
So, dear readers, think carefully before jumping in!
It's too draggy and boring! It's almost two pictures just because I'm in a daze! Really...
The story setting is good, and so are the characters. It's just that the writing is weak and the language is confusing and verbose, which is useless. Tully's tirade in particular was too much. It's not like talking or writing. Don't be too careful with your description. Be more natural and simple. Overall it's a good novel
I feel like everything else is good, but the Prophet's jumping out is my downfall. Childish and impulsive, with a dog's stomach that can't hide two ounces of ghee, just like an ignorant child. Moreover, the prophet inexplicably knows everything and accepts it as a matter of course without any pressure, which is a bit too much. It doesn't fit the background and psychology of the times.
Sprinkle flowers╭(╯ε╰)╮
Why not use plant ash? The protagonist has been decadent for a month and this time he is so active and overly stiff. Decadence doesn't have to appear several times a month. It's upsetting to watch. It's too bad that the protagonist doesn't face reality.
Doesn't Mula have any milk? Ordinary soup and water cannot feed a child, so what did the people here eat when they were babies?
Then he quickly "stomped" the meat with a stone knife---chopped it.
All "smashed" things --- offal
It is better to marinate meat and then grill it than to sprinkle salt on it while grilling.
Leica is twelve years old, and Yang Xi has been in the tribe for ten years, so Leica must not have been born by Yang Xi.