Living It Up in the Apocalypse

Send me a bouquet of flowers. If you want to stop watching until you grow old, come to Naiguo. My dear, Wenwen is very nice. Nai likes her very much. Throw flowers and roll around, asking for hooking up. Now, add a penguin, one, three, six, one, seven, seven, nine, six, three, five.

I think the subject matter is pretty good, but I don't know if it's because there are too many apprentices or the writing isn't cute. Every time I see them come on stage and make jokes or something, I feel bored. I just pull up the progress bar if I can't stand it. So far, except for one named "Ajie", I can't remember the names of the others, and I have no impression of their personalities at all. And there are 5 of them. You must describe them carefully or add more details to make these people have distinct personalities, or at least distinguish them. But this will steal the show. 2,500 Of the 3,000 words in a chapter are devoted to these passers-by, and I feel that I can't stand it anymore.

Hello everyone, I am Detu, the author of this article. It's been three days since I posted the article, but I still haven't received any comments. I'm very sad. Now I will give myself a review and get off to a good start (bless my friends)! The inspiration for this article came from a long time ago, and recently it has become stronger and stronger, so I simply resorted to writing. The background is set more than thirty years later (so there will be many of my fantasies about the future world), when a biochemical crisis broke out. As a result, I was caught up by the heroine who traveled from ancient times (quite unlucky), and then began a story of setting up a mountain and recruiting disciples to fight zombies on the roadside while looking for home. Of course, there will be some errors and flaws in this article. I welcome your comments and comments. I hope that with your suggestions and support, I can write a good story and see my progress! Thank you. Well, blow me a kiss.