
[Prince of Tennis] My Lord, You're So Tsundere!
[网王]大爷,你傲娇!
- Status
- Completed
- Length
- 240k Words
- Genre
- Romance
- Era
- Modern Era
- Updated
- 12y ago
- Source
- JJWXC
Synopsis
75Chapters
2.5kFavorites
8.0Score
261Nutrient gifts
15.5kClicks per chapter
295Comments
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Skip to the extra chapter and prepare to write something 0.0
Okay... I'm an unlovable little angel~ Do you have any new articles?
Please call me little angel (๑•ั็ω•็ั๑)
I thought it was over after the last chapter was over●v●I still haven't read enough
... Although it is very warm, it is not entirely enjoyable
Although I admire your article very much, the speed of your updates makes me very confused! Although I really want to read the article, I'd better work hard and have a rest before writing more! Waiting for you silently!
Finally saw the update! ! ! ! !
Atobe-sama, you can be more arrogant.
Good nightO(∩_∩)O
I have been writing ink for so long, and I finally wrote the book review before the end of Qiqi. I hold it in both hands~~ The first person is used at the beginning, and it is still a dream, which makes people feel a little confused and confused. Dreams often entrust people with things they hope for in reality. When the heroine dreams about her wedding, she probably longs for happiness. As for the comedy elements in The Flower Marriage, well, that didn't make me laugh. It will make people feel that the first chapter is dispensable. Qiqi's writing style is very good. At the beginning, the dream world changes to reality and the interaction with her grandfather, and the heroine's character is portrayed in just a few strokes. I seemed to see Duanmu Qingyang, who has a lively personality and cute behavior, smiling at me: You are welcome to listen to my story. The heroine's cute and innocent character is like a spice in ordinary life, adding laughter to the novel. Her encounters with other princes are also very interesting. I have to say that for the male protagonist of the novel, Keigo Atobe, Qiqi has very successfully shaped his character, and you can feel it from the meeting on the plane. This must be praised. Qiqi seems to have a good understanding of the characters of the characters in Net King. He can grasp the key points in a few words. If I were to write it, it would be a very powerful QAQ [green white eyes... Their meeting was not that amazing. Maybe Duanmu was shocked, but the arrogant Atobu said it didn't mean anything. I once heard that to impress a person, either let him see your good qualities and like you; or let him see your bad qualities and hate you. And our little Duanmu did the latter and accidentally exposed his "evil deeds". In short, although the process is different, the result is the same, that is, Atobe will remember her the first time he sees her! There seems to be a small foreshadowing in the front, and Duanmu looks familiar, which is quite touching. When I read novels, I like to have foreshadowing at the beginning and slowly unravel the secret later. This will make me want to continue reading. Well, she and Atobe must be old acquaintances. The first part of this article can be called Duanmu's daily life. Although Atobe appeared earlier, there is almost no interaction between the two in the first dozen chapters. They all revolve around Duanmu's daily life, her new life in Hyokui, and her new friends and classmates. The interaction between the male and female protagonists is too late, which makes the plot feel a bit delayed. Well, this is also related to my reading habits, except for the otaku novels (the male protagonist is brought out to show his face only after more than a hundred chapters). I like to watch the interaction between the male and female protagonists, and the sooner the better. [Well, actually I am the least qualified to say this! The hero and heroine have only been together for seventy chapters, and their faces are bloody... So sometimes I think it would be better for the male and female protagonists to interact earlier. Maybe the previous content is also an indispensable foreshadowing and must be used to shape the image of the female protagonist and the environment in which she lives. But some small interactions with the male protagonist can be interspersed in the middle, whether indirect or direct. Although the interaction between the male and female protagonists is a bit delayed, it is very natural and does not make people feel abrupt. It feels like a stream of water flowing slowly. This is an advantage. Like me, I hate sudden liking and love. Another thing I must say is that when Aobu's mother, Aobu, and Duanmu are together, they are particularly cute and warm! Maybe it's because there's a contrast between mother and Atobe's cuteness. [Isn't my cuteness very weird... Qiqi once asked me if there was something wrong with this novel and why the data was so cold. In fact, after reading the whole story, I felt that there were no problems. There was no problem with the plot and the writing. It became more and more exciting later on, and the interaction between the male and female protagonists was very loving. If there is a problem, it may be that the audience for this subject is small. The youthful campus of the Internet King is warm and daily oriented. If it is not particularly interesting and cute, it is difficult to write well. In this way, novels tend to be popular and fail to impress readers. I remember Qiqi told me that this was the easiest Wangwang article for her to write, and it was also her favorite. Bless you and hope you can finish writing this novel happily. Maybe you will find that you are making progress every time when you look back. BY A Nuan