[Prince of Tennis] Five Puppet Tales

I have read almost all the articles in your column and I am very moved. I like your writing style very much, it has a sad, delicate, painful and warm feeling. Although some settings are so surreal that they seem stiff at first glance, the gentle and delicate writing style makes everything appear natural. It's a pity that you didn't continue writing. It's already 2021 (laughs). And it's really a pity to lock the text. I didn't want to comment at first, but you said that comments bring meaning to writing, so I think I should express my gratitude for the touch your article brings. My favorites are the Rikkai novel and the Taocheng chapter. At the end of the Rikkai chapter, Yukimura Seiichi's part is a little bit stiff (but I really like this setting), but the psychological description of the Momojo chapter is very, very real and touching. Thanks

Madam, it's 2020~ Is this a trap?

I hope you can continue to write long articles!

Is it because the author is Japanese? When I read this short story, it felt like a Japanese anime. Even before I clicked the next chapter, I felt like I was waiting for the next episode. However, the part that is not mastered well in this short animation short story is the turning point, the turning point from one chapter to another. So how does anime achieve this connection? It's actually very simple. At the end of each chapter, write down the most exciting, explosive, and dissatisfying part of the chapter. But before the next chapter, you should briefly mention some of the contents of the previous chapter. This can also make the transition between first person and third person in the text more harmonious. Let's get back to the content of this article The beginning of this article is very attractive. It is like an appetizer. A good appetizer can guide the stomach to better digest the meal. But no matter how good the appetizer is, it can't make up for the shortcomings of the meal. Why is there so much foreshadowing at the beginning, but the climax comes out all at once, with the promised twist? What about the sense of suspense you mentioned? If you eat too much of this stuff, you'll probably vomit. It would be too tasteless to pour everything out at once, as if there are two things in the dinner, one is called the climax and the other is called the turning point. Even if it's a short story, don't be impatient, otherwise the climax won't be full of twists and turns, and the food won't be as delicious as originally expected. So what's the point of such a beautiful appetizer at the beginning? But I have to say that the author's psychological description is really beautiful. It's like really appearing next to the heroine. As for other places, the problems are not big, so I won't go into details one by one. Thousands of cities stained with ink, presented by Cain

This kind of dreamy thing is definitely not what I really like.

This dead Duo Ji is very powerful. He can make Emperor Wu go to such an extent for her.

The sadistic aura that hits his face, Emperor Wu is so infatuated

555555555 So cruel, why must you die! ! My dear Prince! !

What a great translation

I think of Xiaoyu...