Please Believe

Although I haven't seen it yet, I believe it must be good. After all, Duoduo's production is absolutely excellent?

Xiaoduo~ I forgot to ask~ Do long reviews from the shop need to be posted below?

Wanwan Xiaoyanfeng~ Sprinkle flowers~

Throw flowers! *★,°*:.☆\\(￣▽￣)/$:*.°★* .

Let's add another bouquet of flowers~

It's quite touching, please come on, author~

The author must have just started writing articles, and the use of writing techniques is still relatively unfamiliar. I do have my own unique ideas in terms of plot design. Although I am a newcomer, I clearly use the writing techniques of suppressing first and then rising, contrast and contrast at the beginning. I feel that it is more spiritual. Here, I will briefly talk about some parts that the author did not do well in the writing process. First, break up the sentence. I personally feel that the author is not very good at dividing sentences. On a macro level, the author has indeed achieved conscious control, but between sentences, the weakness of writing power is revealed. For example: If he had known that the person he was going to see today was Zeng Yuyang, his little enemy, then even if there were a thousand knives hanging on his neck, he, Luo Xiaoqiu, would never blink. Today, this was obviously a banquet at Hongmen. In the beginning of the paragraph, the author separates "if", "him" and "today". Here I must talk about the relationship between long and short sentences. First of all, short sentences are not made by cutting out a certain paragraph from a long sentence. The prerequisite for a short sentence to be a short sentence is that it must be complete. Under the premise of completeness, you can use omissions, repetitions and other descriptive techniques to strengthen its own weight or rhythm. Simply cutting words out of sentences will only create a sense of fragmentation. There is another obvious place: Through the slanting bangs that seemed to be deliberately covering her eyes, with a few strands of purple highlights, Luo Xiaoqiu couldn't help but secretly look at the young talent sitting opposite him calmly on the boss's chair with his dodgy peripheral vision. The author must understand that this is a very long sentence. [Luo Xiaoqiu] is the subject, [Looking] is the predicate, and [Young Talent] is the object. That is to say, if the reader wants to understand this sentence, he must read and interpret the very large amount of information attached to this sentence. In other words, this sentence is "too long" and requires the reader to chew it over and over. In this way, the most important fluency of the web article is not there (I have translated two sentences from the first chapter, but I will not go into details later). Second, the writing is too scattered. This is not a structure book, but a writing book. My personal feeling at the moment is that the author has almost no ability to change scenes. (Point

I would like to make a comment. The fonts in the copy are too small for an old person like me to see clearly. Maybe those with good eyesight can see clearly, but the color is too light. I want the blue one to see it clearly. It is best to use Song font, because you are not only doing it to look good, but more importantly, you want others to see what you are writing. I think size 4 is suitable, and mine is size 5 because I have bad eyesight. Keep it and watch it slowly.

In fact, the girl writes well, come on.

Sprinkle flowers, come on. The cover is very beautiful.