[Entertainment Industry] Beauty Seeks a Husband

Hey, well, among a lot of gd articles, Emma finally saw an article by Che Bao. Come on, the author (??ω`?)

Is there any update when I open V? ? ?

I'm still the best = =

Updates are already slow and new pitfalls have opened up. . . . . .

Well. The long review promised is here. I don't know how long I can write it, but I just wrote it based on my feelings. Well, first of all, I have actually read Mengmeng's article a long time ago (today is not the first time). Anyway, it seems that Changpingpu has already given me plot suggestions. After all, I am a professional anime fan writer, and I don't really understand the direction of Korean entertainment fans. I can only give you my experience as a reader when reading the article. Don't mind if you say it badly, Mengmeng, because I love you! 2333 The first is the writing. The writing is generally very smooth. As a third-person vision, Mengmeng does a natural and smooth job in switching perspectives. Everyone's inner drama is also fully expressed (this is my weak expression of strong admiration, kneeling down and licking the big one). But just because Mengmeng is good at this aspect, the weaknesses are also revealed. The overall rhythm is almost too fast. Some psychological activities should be expressed with blank space and facial expressions (not that it must be expressed in this way, but in some cases, this way of expression is better than writing directly). Mengmeng also writes it directly. As a result, the entire article lacks depth and becomes a fast-food article. I don't know what Mengmeng thought of this article. After all, whether it is a fast food style or a flavor style, in the final analysis, it depends on the author's attitude. As we said in the reader group, I can't remember the technical terms that Mango said. Anyway, I just try to add depth to the articles I like, and to make others laugh in order to earn clicks. That's what it means. It depends on how Mengmeng defines this article. Secondly, let's talk about writing style. Mengmeng's writing is very good and her expressions are quite accurate. The only thing that cannot be considered a shortcoming is that it may be caused by my personal preference-when Mengmeng writes sentences, there is always the problem of the subject being hidden. It seems to be ok in some cases and the connection is in place. But in most cases of Mengmeng, the subject not only disappears, but also disappears and is replaced in the same sentence. This always makes me confused, and I don't feel like I'm doing it in one go. But maybe that's just my personal feeling. When I write, I care more about grammar, so I may pay too much attention to it when I read your article. Finally, let's talk about personal preferences. I have a general understanding of Mengmeng's writing style, which is basically different from mine. For example, when I say a sentence alone, I will often clearly indicate who said it, marking it with "he said". Mengmeng doesn't quite label it, although many times I can guess who said it by contacting the context, but it always makes me stop and guess-it's still the same question, interrupting the coherence of the text. I can't read an article or a chapter in one go. Stumbling makes me uncomfortable while reading. Of course, this is Mengmeng's personal preference, and it is also my personal preference. For reference only. Well, I wish Mengmeng's collection will skyrocket! ! ! If you have the chance, of course you will promote my Feng Chui 233333 (Hey, you have to advertise here, are you so shameless!)

Hurry! ! ! Diligent updates... Preferably twice a day! ! !

I'm so shocked that I really can't stand it anymore

I found out silently that you updated, but there was no prompt yet. I'm not happy. It's all Jinjiang's fault.

I think about it too, every day.

I just unlocked it secretly -_-||, I want to continue chasing