A Hazy Affair

The ancient style of writing is about the grudges and grudges of rich families and deep sadomasochism, but I like it hahahaha

Spread flowers, Xiao Xiao is so smart.

From the beginning to the end, the pursuit of the article ends here Although it is finished, the meaning is still unfinished, but I have to admit that, as the author said, it would be better to stop here at the end! In fact, when it comes to the extra episode of "The Darkness", a lot of people think He Yuan is more likable than He Chen In addition to the problem of preference for characters, In fact, I think another reason is that He Chen's character creation is not successful enough. Well, how should I put it? A lot of the text is written using the vision of the heroine Wen Wan, and He Chen has enough appearances and aura - the early teasing is indeed eye-catching. But in the later period, the entanglement over the sister-in-law issue became a little confusing. So even though all the subsequent actions to recover Xiaowan and clear her name were successful, I still felt that it was a bit less impressive than before - well, I can't express myself well, I mean, doing the right thing is not as impressive as doing the bad thing, XD There is another one. This article is probably the one with the most side plots and supporting characters. It feels a little messy - right! The copywriting says that Xiaowan has many peach blossoms There are really many clues (branch lines) involved in the article 1. Gu Ex-husband: It involves Ji Yan, Wu Di, and Wu Miao (in the extra story?) - In fact, Ji Yan and Gu Ex-husband had a great influence on Xiao Wan. This paragraph is clearly explained, but I think the changes in Gu Qian Husband's feelings - his later retention of Xiao Wan and his targeting of He Chen, his feelings for Xiao Wan and perhaps his guilt for Ji Yan are more realistic. 2. Xiao He, although there are hints that he is a shot peach, but I think his existence ended in the hospital. Later, it was not very good, like a decoration, Xiao Wan exposed him - confronting He Chen instead of sincerely, and hostility towards his mother and He Chen (He Yuan said in the extra story that he misled and used the child). However, if he is treated as one of the peach blossoms, this treatment is actually insufficient, or it will weaken his role and role status. 3. Zhou Xiansheng - an admirer with slight mental problems. He actually didn't appear much, but when He Shen was in the most dire straits, everyone turned to him. But what happened in Thailand later, he was killed in battle, XD - In fact, I think the only thing Zhou didn't handle well was the lack of foreshadowing in the early stage. Although there were hints from Mrs. Luo in Thailand, but later, it always felt a bit far-fetched - if this method was to be cannon fodder to get rid of this supporting role, the foreshadowing still needs to be added. 4. In Wen Wan's work, Wen Wan is considered a psychiatrist, but sometimes he can hit the nail on the head by applying what he has learned - for example, when he exposed Xiao He and Jiang Ying, and when he affirmed and responded to Zhou Xiansheng's psychological problems, his presence is just a bit low, right? ——Well, how can I put it, it is easy to forget that Xiao Wan is a doctor and a psychiatrist. In fact, psychiatrists have studied psychology and can observe people's emotions. If it can be highlighted a little bit, I think it will be more exciting. Of course, people are often obsessed with authority. You can see a person's emotions at this time, but you may not be able to see a person's thoughts. I hope to see a similar situation: Xiao Wan can see the other person's nervousness or other things, and then speculate, but never expected that the result is different from what was expected - for example, with He Chen, XD (slightly paranoid about the art and specialization) 5. The Thai story, maybe for the sake of reasonable explanation, derived the Luo couple. Alas, it still feels like stealing the spotlight. In general, in fact, I think it is because there are too many things to explain, and there are visual problems (I guess there is no way to solve this, let's see if we can start from the visual or psychological aspects of the heroine? - Is it possible? I don't know, I just feel). Therefore, under the premise of explanation, the image of Nanzhu is not clear enough and prominent. Finally, the story is complicated and exciting (the plot is exciting and attractive), and the characters have outstanding personalities and distinct images. Greedy readers like me always want to have both - although this book has some, for example, the story in the main text is complex and exciting, and the extra stories have wonderful characters, but... XD I originally wanted to post it in the final chapter, but for that reason, I can only post it here! I have finished following the series. Thank you to the author for his hard work. Congratulations on the publication. I will work on revising the manuscript for publication, but you must also pay attention to rest, ╭(╯3╰)╮

Well... Although many people feel sorry for the second brother... But I still prefer the third brother and Xiaowan... What kind of scumbag is the third brother... He hasn't broken my bottom line yet... PS: To put it bluntly... A child who is not related to him by blood... Often appears in front of his eyes, which is really unacceptable to ordinary people...

Yo yo yo, is the next chapter the moment when happiness comes? Ho ho, spread the flowers.

Second brother, you were born in the wrong child. Woohoo.

I made a dish that "you" likes to eat. One word is missing. It's so beautiful. This is much more exciting compared to the male and female protagonists.

Will the second brother surrender in the next chapter?

This chapter has a lot of words~ I'm a little afraid that it will be over in one chapter, no no~ I want to see the second brother and the little princess together~! ! ! It's so cute just thinking about it! But actually, I think you said the next chapter will be finished →_→ I think it's better to write the next chapter, but it's still not enough, so you might as well write 20! Don't pursue 100 perfection, pursue 20 perfection! Let me tell you, what I find weird about this chapter! 1. Zhong Linze's attitude towards He Yuan felt a bit like that of a younger brother towards an elder brother (that is, when they met again later and said that he would pursue Xiao Xiao again after divorce) Here, he knows the inside story of the He family - the second brother was abandoned by the He family, and he also looks down on the second brother. He is the second brother's fair-weather friend Jiang Zi And here he already knew that He Yuan liked Xiao Xiao, and even sabotaged his plan to report him for taking drugs - but when he showed up, it took him a while to tell Xiao Xiao that He Yuan plotted against him and asked him to break up with Xiao Xiao and marry someone else. 2. Xiao Xiao's impression of the second brother. Xiao Xiao said that he didn't remember the second brother at all, but when they met again (probably the first time they met in China), Xiao Xiao was very embarrassed. This kind of scene should not be forgotten. 3. The second brother met Xiao Xiao for the first time - a foreign welfare institution. Although this writing is very good, why did Xiao Xiao go abroad? Was it explained before or did I miss it? Xiao Xiao and Xiao Wan have been classmates and best friends for many years. Xiao Wan seems to have been in China all the time, XD In the end, it turns out that only when there is something to protect will one become strong quickly - a man, or, here is the portrayal of the second brother

How miserable Xiao Xiao would have been if his second brother hadn't been waiting for him for so many years. However, how could Zhong Linze have the nerve to come back to Xiao Xiao later? !