[Prince of Tennis] I Transmigrated and Landed in the Prince's Arms

Your article - it's really bleak, pfft

First of all, it is still a common practice. The following opinions only represent personal opinions. If you don't like it, don't criticize it. If you are sincere, please don't disturb me. First, let me talk about my feelings when I saw this title. "Once you traveled through time, you ran into the uncle's arms." The plot that comes to mind automatically is that the heroine traveled through time unexpectedly, and when she traveled to the world of the Net King, she found herself in the arms of Atobe Oda. This fits the title even more, doesn't it? In the author's article, the heroine time-traveled inexplicably, and the time-traveling happened in an ordinary way. The most amazing thing is that the only character who appears in that chapter is the heroine (the characters who appear in memory are not counted). Is she really a man? In the following text, the overall storyline progresses too quickly. Each story is mentioned in just a few strokes without any details. It gives people a sense of running accounts. For example, in the author's article, he suddenly mentions that the heroine is very capable in a certain chapter, but there is no foreshadowing before this. Even if it is an introduction about the heroine's identity and abilities before time travel, readers will have a general idea in their minds: the heroine is very strong. Of course, this is a lazy method. The second step is to slowly reveal the heroine's efforts little by little in the text after the time travel, so that the heroine can slowly become stronger and develop into a mature character. However, the author did not use any of them. He suddenly said that the heroine was very capable, saying that he could not accept it for the moment. Next, let's talk about the details of each story. In the author's article, each story is very brief, and it can almost be said that it is covered in a few strokes. There is also a lack of connection between chapters, that is, the span is too large for people to connect. Of course, this problem is not a big one. The most important thing is the details of each story. For example, in the article about the heroine joining the student union, the author said that the heroine's previous performance was mediocre. Even the heroine's brother Meito did not believe that she could enter the student union. The test for the heroine is inevitable. The author also wrote about this, but! The readers did not see how the heroine solved this test! I just saw what the test was out of nowhere, and the heroine passed it! The same goes for the "warmth" part of the photography theme. The heroine's inspiration came out of nowhere! One second I was worried about this, and the next second I suddenly became enlightened. Without any advice from anyone or anything, I figured out some things inexplicably like an enlightenment and found the inspiration for photography! There are many similar ones, so I won't list them all here. In fact, the author should write about these places in detail and spend a lot of pen and ink, instead of rushing through them. Appropriate detailing of the storyline is also very important. It is a manifestation of the author's writing style and overall idea, and it is also an important step in coloring the article. Finally, there is the author's great writing style. The overall writing style is joyful and ridiculing. This is everyone's aesthetic taste, whether it is literary or artistic, lacking in both or happy. But the sudden insertion of literary and artistic touches in the middle seems strange and inexplicable, such as this paragraph: "The afternoon sun is warm and fragrant. When I look at the sun through my fingers, I realize that time is very thin and will slip away inadvertently." Don't chase what has left, don't wait for what you promised will come, just grasp your own present. Who said that waiting will make life happy? It's a lie. Many things will gradually go out of place while you wait with hope...' It seems really baffling. For example, the overall author's writing style is very abrupt and uncoordinated. Appropriate literature and art is okay, but it must be done well. There is another point that the author can ignore. There are too many original characters in the early stage. The only characters in Net King are Atobe Tai and the heroine's brother Meito, which gives people the illusion of reading an original novel. [Okay, it's the reason why I personally don't like this in Rokuliu. [Hey, Paifei] Finally, I wish the author will write better and better, Ganba Daddy! [Caramel is not sweet, long review shop - Liuliu]

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No, there's a lot more to this article. Isn't this the rhythm that we've already been together? What else is going on?