[The Older Brother of War] You Can't Play Amnesia Like This

Hahaha, I finally finished reading it. Although the ending is not what I wanted, I can still accept it. It's just that the writing of Qi Zhi was too dark!

What is locked?

Sigh... I have to say... It's a bit unfinished...

I always feel that the climax has not unfolded at all, it just feels like it comes down as soon as it rises. And except for Masaomi's time and the occasional few times, the heroine seems to have been passive. Maybe it has something to do with the escape you wrote later, but she has always been suppressed by the brothers, which makes me feel that the heroine is just a paper tiger. To put it simply, I am a little disappointed with the heroine. In fact, in the later stage, I read it with some expectation that the heroine would be brave enough to fight back against her brothers. As a result, the author didn't write it... It's a bit regretful, because with the setting of Slippery Ghost, I could write more things, and I could write better. Finally, there is the ending. The ending is too hasty, many things are not explained clearly, the twists and jumps are too big, and it ends before people can react. All kinds of bad ending rhythms... These are just my personal opinions. I hope you don't mind. I just hope you can write better and better. I'm also looking forward to the chapter about brother war + tutor and name gag. I will continue to support you, come on!

I still like dates very much. Is there any gentleman?

Mirai already likes Kaname? Or is it just soft-hearted?

Tomoko is actually very cute~

Sister Marianne♂ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh run run is so awesome_(′ཀ`‖ ∠)_In short, DT is a very interesting animation (from various aspects (.

Marrying a brother is also very good

Shizuo is so loving~~~~What a pity. . . . Shizuo is from Izaya. . . . . . . . = =