Good-for-Nothing

I really like the arrogant male protagonist (//?//). It turns out that Yan Gui is so arrogant and follows his father.

Can I say that I couldn't understand it at first? I just persisted and wanted to see who the male protagonist was, so I read it for more than ten chapters. I also wanted to see if their life experiences were siblings, and I read more than ten chapters. After reading it, I thought about it, and it was pretty good.

Drifting by silently, it's pretty good, the writing is relaxed, and the relationship between brother and sister is very cute.

Pogua: In the old days, literati divided the character "gua" into 28 to mark the year, which means sixteen years old. It was mostly used for women in poetry. Also known as "divide melon". Pogua is often used to refer to a woman's "broken virginity", that is, her first sexual intercourse. This is an incorrect usage, but it is also commonly used in spoken language and ancient and modern novels. Why is it used so obscenely here? The scene of Ah He and Wen Yan together has a sense of immediacy of two top students trying to be together carefully. Although it also has the feeling of a beautiful first love, it is still inferior to Xiao Shan's entangled, hesitant and confused care.

Awkward scumbag is actually quite fun to be in an awkward mood

I was shocked. It suddenly ended like this. What I was worried about yesterday about whether it would be a scam ended today. It is really a wonderful world. "Under the pontoon, there are lotus lanterns, sparkling stars, clear and hazy." The scenery is so beautiful to me, it's like a painting slowly unfolding in front of me, and it's like I'm immersed in the moonlight under the stars. I still feel awkward at the last minute, and still struggle with the issue of trust between husband and wife after sharing hardships. It always feels weird. However, I have not had a similar experience, so I won't comment. After all, it is normal for couples who are close friends and have spent their lives together to have any problems. I'm so happy to experience this ending moment with you. I hope you can revise this article again if you have time in the future. It's so beautiful, it would be great if you could practice some sentences. Looking forward to your next work.

I like that casual "oh".

Am I this legendary little girl? ? ? I feel like being transparent is so hard, and I'm worried that you'll give up in a fit of anger. I hope you can write and become a great god. It was silently updated while I was trying hard to make up points and write a review?

The description of Wen Yan is actually far less vivid than that of Xiao Shan. I don't know whether it's the author's lack of writing skills or intentionality. I hope it's the latter. I don't know if it would be a bit rude to say this, because the author calls himself a little transparent, but I like this article very much, as if it is gurgling water, I just feel like I am writing it in my heart, telling my feelings directly, I hope the author can write better and better. This is an article written from a first-person perspective. All events and characters in the story are told from Ah He's perspective, and Wen Yan is such a character. For him, my understanding is that first love is the joy that makes you feel as if you are holding a treasure in your heart when you think about it, it is a flawless jade without any flaws, it is the bright moonlight in the sky. A young man like Zhilan Yushu, but that's all he has. There is no contradiction and no tension. He seems to be a symbol called Zhilan Yushu. But as Ah Qiqi said in the long comment below, who doesn't have such a young boy in his heart, the feeling of first love, the feeling of longing to say a word to him, and walking the same road with him. I think this treatment is really good.

"The water surface is clear and round, and the wind lifts the loads one by one." This sentence is just a metaphor. The "silver carp" behind it, no matter how you look at it, it will make a show. What if it is really a joke? "The flowers bloom in a variety of colors in spring, but they are not as good as half a lotus root in summer." I like this sentence. In fact, I hate it when people write in seemingly literate terms, especially when they are written with empty words and phrases. Beauty is beautiful, but soulless, which is a waste of resources. Although I like the clever words you use when describing scenes, it's a good thing you only wrote a few sentences, otherwise I would really be helpless. The interaction between Xiaoshan and Xiaofuzi is very interesting, and it feels like childhood sweethearts, but one side is a lazy naughty boy, and the other side is a serious little researcher who pretends to be sophisticated and relies on his elders. There are countless sparks, and the feeling when writing in the first person. Without the third-party God's perspective, all kinds of imagination are very convenient.