Snatch the elixirs, seize the spirit weapons, hunt down the secret manuals, claim the golden finger...
Not one of these System missions has been completed, all because of that villain!
"If you want them, they're yours. But this golden finger..." A glint flashed in Boss Ji's eyes as he smiled meaningfully. "Heh. My finger still isn't enough to satisfy you?"
Unable to resist the man pressing against him, Yang Xin sulked and said nothing.
Isn't it supposed to be the protagonist who gets all hot and bothered while fighting wits and strength with the villain? What's with this dead body's shell and a villain who has the same face as his younger brother?
The System flashed a wicked smile: Since time immemorial, the protagonist has always been the common nemesis of villains and male supporting characters, dear~ Take your time and see for yourself~
Yang Xin woke up one day to find himself inexplicably reborn as a hapless male supporting character. He failed his missions, failed to steal the golden finger, and ended up catching the eye of the perverted villain. Tormented and ravaged, he has been racing around ever since, fighting the protagonist and defending his chrysanthemum, never straying far from the fray.
Cultivating one's character beats cultivating immortality. What a painful lesson!
Topping the protagonist is nothing compared to topping the male supporting character. What a crowd-pleasing story!
A protagonist who has gone bad,
A villain BOSS who's been bad from the start,
A male supporting character who's always getting the shaft.
Who's the top and who's the bottom? One-on-one, happy ending. The title makes it all clear...
P.S. This is a practice-and-growth story. I won't abandon it, no matter what. I'm always open to suggestions.
Looking for friends, conversation, guidance, and criticism. Please add it to your collection!
Didn't you say it's not a scam? The results are already in 2015 and have not been updated. Big... Where is your moral integrity? Isn't it already broken? /(ㄒOㄒ)/~~
This book is totally □
Take your time.
After tidying up her clothes, Xuanxin saw Ji Yuan still lying naked on the bed. It must be naked here, as being naked always reminds me of baldness. . . .
"Master Qi, the disciples have not found any trace of the leader. It's just, just..." Lin Ming said carefully, "It's just that some disciples said that the last time they saw the leader, he looked crazy and as if he had fallen into a demon..." Yan Zixu shouted in shock, "Li Changrong, you can't talk nonsense! How can the master fall into a demon!"
Is Lin Ming here the wrong number? It should be Li Changrong.
This chapter is a bit confusing, mainly because there are too many characters, and I can't remember their names very well. It seems a bit confusing... If it is an insignificant character who will not appear again in the later chapters or has no role in the story, you don't need to write down the name.
I don't know how I plan to write it later. Is it going to be about the protagonist growing up with Lin Qingyu in detail or a brief introduction, and then writing about what happens after the protagonist grows up. If we want to describe in detail being together with Lin Qingyu, if the space is too much, I guess Lin Qingyu's role will be more than that of Ji Yuan, right? And it was said before that Lin Qingyu will like the protagonist, in which case Ji Yuan will probably become a soy sauce attack_(:зゝ∠)_... And it is estimated that readers will also have a better impression of Lin Qingyu, calling for a change of attack or NPC. This happened in a few articles I read before, so I am worried, because I still prefer Ji Yuan, and I hope that the supporting role will not exceed the two protagonists_(:зゝ∠)_...
Oh my God! It's really God's unfolding. I'm still thinking that the general routine is to successfully change the original body's useless physique and then work hard to practice or something. I didn't expect that mushrooms would take a different approach. It's a bit unexpected. This setting is very novel. Keep up the good work~
Encourage. Are you happy? Respond to requests (╯▽╰)
I give you love, it's so well written.
Actually, what I mean is whether Qing Yu will fall in love with Yang Xin in the later development.
I also feel that feelings don't happen casually, especially between two men.
So sometimes I don't like the so-called cannon fodder that appears in other articles. How can a man fall in love with another man so easily? This is not a world where everyone is the same.
Slow build-up is actually not a big problem. As long as the space is used for the development of the plot and not wasted on unnecessary descriptions, it will not appear to be procrastinating. Instead, it will make people feel that it is not enough to watch and want to see the development later.
So you don't have to worry about slow heating of mushrooms~
In addition, regarding the description of the plot of killing the cat, I think it is good to have Yang Xin kill the cat.
The first one is also about the view of the character Madonna. I really don't like the attribute of Madonna. "Everyone who doesn't care about himself will be punished by heaven and earth." This sentence is quite accurate. As a person who traveled through time and space, Yang Xin was given a second life. Although he knew nothing about this world, he must still want to live. Although the cat had been with him for a while and had some feelings for him, he would definitely choose to kill the cat in order to survive.
At the same time, it was precisely because he had such feelings for the cat that he was reluctant when Ji Yuan asked him to kill the cat. Just like what was written in the article, "Yang Xin really had such a lucky idea. Even if he made the decision, He wanted Ji Yuan to take action. Human beings will always find excuses for their selfishness. Facing these simple animals, humans are so shameful. But Ji Yuan insisted on breaking Yang Xin's cover. He let Yang Xin make his own decision and force him to face his own selfishness and inner hypocrisy. " The act of killing the cat forced Yang Xin to face his own heart, and also made this character fuller. He is not a Virgin, he will not have overwhelming sympathy, and will not give up his life because of some guilt or intolerance.
Similarly, it was written later that "Yang Xin angrily broke away from Ji Yuan's arms. The moment he fell into darkness, the last scene in front of him was Ji Yuan's lips raised sarcastically: "I lied to you for fun." "Here it is written that Ji Yuan deceives Yang Xin into using the creature of a cat to break the formation and asks Yang Xin to kill the cat. This also reflects Ji Yuan's character. The previous description of Ji Yuan pulling Yang Xin's hair also reflects his childish side. The whole character's image becomes full and vivid through the description of some details. This can be said to be written by Mushroom very well.
I am very much looking forward to the development of the relationship between the two in the following chapters, because Mushroom has controlled the characters very well in the previous chapters, so my expectations are also very high.
Another point is, will Ji Yuan still remember what happened in the formation described earlier? Because Yang Xin traveled back in time to the childhood of the original owner, this episode about the formation should not have happened yet, right? Also, because it is described that Ji Yuan and brother Yang Xin look the same, will Ji Yuan get the memory of brother Yang Xin in the future?
I was originally going to reply to that comment, but because there was too much nonsense, I posted it separately~
I hope Mushroom will continue to work hard~Looking forward to the development of the next article~
Oh my god, 6 years ago, wasn't it updated?
Didn't you say it's not a scam? The results are already in 2015 and have not been updated. Big... Where is your moral integrity? Isn't it already broken? /(ㄒOㄒ)/~~
This book is totally □
Take your time. After tidying up her clothes, Xuanxin saw Ji Yuan still lying naked on the bed. It must be naked here, as being naked always reminds me of baldness. . . .
"Master Qi, the disciples have not found any trace of the leader. It's just, just..." Lin Ming said carefully, "It's just that some disciples said that the last time they saw the leader, he looked crazy and as if he had fallen into a demon..." Yan Zixu shouted in shock, "Li Changrong, you can't talk nonsense! How can the master fall into a demon!" Is Lin Ming here the wrong number? It should be Li Changrong. This chapter is a bit confusing, mainly because there are too many characters, and I can't remember their names very well. It seems a bit confusing... If it is an insignificant character who will not appear again in the later chapters or has no role in the story, you don't need to write down the name.
I don't know how I plan to write it later. Is it going to be about the protagonist growing up with Lin Qingyu in detail or a brief introduction, and then writing about what happens after the protagonist grows up. If we want to describe in detail being together with Lin Qingyu, if the space is too much, I guess Lin Qingyu's role will be more than that of Ji Yuan, right? And it was said before that Lin Qingyu will like the protagonist, in which case Ji Yuan will probably become a soy sauce attack_(:зゝ∠)_... And it is estimated that readers will also have a better impression of Lin Qingyu, calling for a change of attack or NPC. This happened in a few articles I read before, so I am worried, because I still prefer Ji Yuan, and I hope that the supporting role will not exceed the two protagonists_(:зゝ∠)_...
Oh my God! It's really God's unfolding. I'm still thinking that the general routine is to successfully change the original body's useless physique and then work hard to practice or something. I didn't expect that mushrooms would take a different approach. It's a bit unexpected. This setting is very novel. Keep up the good work~
Encourage. Are you happy? Respond to requests (╯▽╰)
I give you love, it's so well written.
Actually, what I mean is whether Qing Yu will fall in love with Yang Xin in the later development. I also feel that feelings don't happen casually, especially between two men. So sometimes I don't like the so-called cannon fodder that appears in other articles. How can a man fall in love with another man so easily? This is not a world where everyone is the same. Slow build-up is actually not a big problem. As long as the space is used for the development of the plot and not wasted on unnecessary descriptions, it will not appear to be procrastinating. Instead, it will make people feel that it is not enough to watch and want to see the development later. So you don't have to worry about slow heating of mushrooms~ In addition, regarding the description of the plot of killing the cat, I think it is good to have Yang Xin kill the cat. The first one is also about the view of the character Madonna. I really don't like the attribute of Madonna. "Everyone who doesn't care about himself will be punished by heaven and earth." This sentence is quite accurate. As a person who traveled through time and space, Yang Xin was given a second life. Although he knew nothing about this world, he must still want to live. Although the cat had been with him for a while and had some feelings for him, he would definitely choose to kill the cat in order to survive. At the same time, it was precisely because he had such feelings for the cat that he was reluctant when Ji Yuan asked him to kill the cat. Just like what was written in the article, "Yang Xin really had such a lucky idea. Even if he made the decision, He wanted Ji Yuan to take action. Human beings will always find excuses for their selfishness. Facing these simple animals, humans are so shameful. But Ji Yuan insisted on breaking Yang Xin's cover. He let Yang Xin make his own decision and force him to face his own selfishness and inner hypocrisy. " The act of killing the cat forced Yang Xin to face his own heart, and also made this character fuller. He is not a Virgin, he will not have overwhelming sympathy, and will not give up his life because of some guilt or intolerance. Similarly, it was written later that "Yang Xin angrily broke away from Ji Yuan's arms. The moment he fell into darkness, the last scene in front of him was Ji Yuan's lips raised sarcastically: "I lied to you for fun." "Here it is written that Ji Yuan deceives Yang Xin into using the creature of a cat to break the formation and asks Yang Xin to kill the cat. This also reflects Ji Yuan's character. The previous description of Ji Yuan pulling Yang Xin's hair also reflects his childish side. The whole character's image becomes full and vivid through the description of some details. This can be said to be written by Mushroom very well. I am very much looking forward to the development of the relationship between the two in the following chapters, because Mushroom has controlled the characters very well in the previous chapters, so my expectations are also very high. Another point is, will Ji Yuan still remember what happened in the formation described earlier? Because Yang Xin traveled back in time to the childhood of the original owner, this episode about the formation should not have happened yet, right? Also, because it is described that Ji Yuan and brother Yang Xin look the same, will Ji Yuan get the memory of brother Yang Xin in the future? I was originally going to reply to that comment, but because there was too much nonsense, I posted it separately~ I hope Mushroom will continue to work hard~Looking forward to the development of the next article~