By the River of Forgetfulness, beneath the flowers on the far shore, is where everything begins and ends. So many people wait here for an ending.
"He waited hopelessly for that person for so long, and I waited with him for just as long. But, as expected, sin cannot be erased so easily."
"Since they already regret what happened, those who feel remorse deserve a chance. Who knows, perhaps they can be happy from then on?"
"You really are one to dwell on life's sorrows. How many chances can there possibly be in this world?"
Three different experiences, yet three heartbreaks alike.
Seated high above, one person smiled, bewitching and desolate. "Do not believe in the next life. You... are not fated to meet again in the next life."
PS: The author is a devoted HE fan and never reads BE, so you know what to expect. = =
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I read one chapter, and it's a very good writing style and a good setting. However, I feel that there are a few wordings that are not quite right. At first, I was slightly offended by the word "charming and desolate", and later on when I described Po Meng's "beautiful face", I felt that it was not quite right either. Since it is an ancient style, it is better to avoid these words as much as possible.
Already collected~
The plot should be more fleshed out and compact :), and the small problems need to be corrected - maybe I'm too picky, there are a few things that make me feel quite awkward. For example, this one has red eyes like a ghost. It is already a ghost. Why use the word "ru"?
I really like this article~\\(≧▽≦)/~
I have read several chapters and I feel that Yu Xia Tian's writing style is pretty good~ At least I still can't write something like this after all these years of reading. I can't give you any professional advice, but I feel like I wasn't attracted by the plot after reading it, and I don't really know what it's about (I admit I was a little distracted, but a good article should catch the reader's attention~) I personally think that the author wants to sell the article in a cute way and pretend to be noble (what am I talking nonsense!). Maybe a little more detail and inner description will make the article fuller. Since it is my first time to write an article, it is very good. It is much higher than many novice articles. If you have a good writing foundation and a good idea, you will have a more exciting article. Author, you will definitely thrive~! A flower
New author? The question is not bad. The storyline lacks a bit O(∩_∩)O
It's a little sad, don't miss it again! (~ O ~)~zZ Come on! Very well written (∩_∩)
Well written, I have added you to my favorites, but I haven't seen an increase in the number of favorites.
Abused. . So hungry. . .
It turns out that the CP of the King of Hell is him, mainly because his name is too ordinary, I didn't expect him at all, and I don't remember him at all.
Playing with the Three of Swords, when I saw the name Ye Fan... I trembled all over.
I read one chapter, and it's a very good writing style and a good setting. However, I feel that there are a few wordings that are not quite right. At first, I was slightly offended by the word "charming and desolate", and later on when I described Po Meng's "beautiful face", I felt that it was not quite right either. Since it is an ancient style, it is better to avoid these words as much as possible. Already collected~
The plot should be more fleshed out and compact :), and the small problems need to be corrected - maybe I'm too picky, there are a few things that make me feel quite awkward. For example, this one has red eyes like a ghost. It is already a ghost. Why use the word "ru"?
I really like this article~\\(≧▽≦)/~
I have read several chapters and I feel that Yu Xia Tian's writing style is pretty good~ At least I still can't write something like this after all these years of reading. I can't give you any professional advice, but I feel like I wasn't attracted by the plot after reading it, and I don't really know what it's about (I admit I was a little distracted, but a good article should catch the reader's attention~) I personally think that the author wants to sell the article in a cute way and pretend to be noble (what am I talking nonsense!). Maybe a little more detail and inner description will make the article fuller. Since it is my first time to write an article, it is very good. It is much higher than many novice articles. If you have a good writing foundation and a good idea, you will have a more exciting article. Author, you will definitely thrive~! A flower
New author? The question is not bad. The storyline lacks a bit O(∩_∩)O
It's a little sad, don't miss it again! (~ O ~)~zZ Come on! Very well written (∩_∩)
Well written, I have added you to my favorites, but I haven't seen an increase in the number of favorites.
Abused. . So hungry. . .
It turns out that the CP of the King of Hell is him, mainly because his name is too ordinary, I didn't expect him at all, and I don't remember him at all.
Playing with the Three of Swords, when I saw the name Ye Fan... I trembled all over.