"You don't need to apologize." Her smile faded. Her voice was cold, each word spoken slowly. "That day, when you killed me, you also killed all the affection we'd built up over the years. I've repaid the debt I owed you for saving my life back then. From now on, we owe each other nothing."
This story was rejected by a magazine a few months ago. The editor said it wasn't romantic enough = = Since it was just sitting around, I'm posting it here for everyone to laugh at. Please give me your feedback.
New story: The One Who Rows Against the Current
Life is like peeling an onion: every layer brings a new shock. After graduation, Tao Yun tumbles into a world of magical realism, with "truths" lurking everywhere, a deranged female boss, a childhood friend whose true nature is gradually revealed, a boyfriend shrouded in mystery...
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Very happy, both King Wu and Chu Yu are happy. After all, King Wu is more likeable than Cheng Hua
Yanyan, what can I do if you are like this? . Is there no contact information on Weibo or something? Very worried about you!
My dear author, there is nothing wrong with the writing, but the story is not very immersive, and the rendering is from the wrong angle. The reason why the manuscript was rejected is that it is not romantic enough? I guess maybe the scenes between the male and female protagonists are not enough to impress the viewers. I don't know if it's appropriate to say this. It's purely my personal opinion. Keep up the good work~
The novel is full of fun! If it were not a matter of life and death today, it would be better not to meet the beautiful woman than to spend all these years missing her in vain. = =, You understand! Come to my pot, I want to be friends with you! Penguin: Yiqi Si Ling, Wu Ling Erwu, Jiujiu! Come and decode it!