One-sentence blurb
This is the story of a lame, divorced umbrella maker waiting impatiently for his "wife" to come home.
It's also the story of a general who, after laying down his arms and returning to the countryside, travels a thousand miles with his dowry to "marry" himself off.
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Love at fifteen.
Parting at twenty.
Reunion at thirty.
The moon wanes for three lifetimes, yet love binds us for one.
The soul and bones of an umbrella, the strokes of a Xuan writing brush, pale ink sketching out the first half of your life and the second half of ours.
Once I have gathered all twelve umbrella ribs, I will open my humble gate and welcome you as my bride.
A few words from the author
This is a BL story. The pairing is a gentle, doting seme and a sharp-tongued, prickly uke.
Inspired by the idea, "The flower-lined path has never been swept for a guest; today, the humble gate opens for you." (If your mind went somewhere else, go stand facing the wall.)
Mostly cozy, with no angst. (If there is angst, the author must have lost their mind, so please send medicine.) A farming-life story, with the uke marrying the seme. HE, 1v1.
Quietly started a new story.
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After reading it, I like the author's writing style. However, the timeline of the first half of the story is not very clear, which makes it confusing. And the final plot... Isn't the tension enough? It always feels like it's not intense enough. But overall, I still like it very much. What touched me the most was the part where Shentu forged a weapon to death (a bit strange). I would like to express my gratitude to the author~
The writing is good, the plot has twists and turns, and the character design is also very full. The various loves and the protagonist's love can see the perfection in imperfection. It's just that I think the abuse points in the article are too painful and unnecessary. It makes Master Zhong look too pretentious and stupid and pitiful. Since incompleteness is realistic, then the plot design can be more realistic. He had lost his memory over there, but he was still holding it here. In the end, it was even more bizarre, abandoning the fool and running away to the capital. If it weren't for the novel, these two people would have missed it thousands of times. Just to show that Mu Mu still likes him even though he is stupid, this plot design is too unnecessary. Only intense conflicts can better shape the characters and make the plot more interesting.
Hey~ I came back from the trip and found out that the finale is great!!! Looking forward to the extra story~\\(≧▽≦)/~
I silently came to my senses and cried loudly. Author, you didn't explain how Feng Cibai and the kitten agreed to be raised. Rolling around and crying.
Ah ah ah ah, that means Shen Tuyan's illness has not healed and he has not remembered. Can they really grow old together? It's tortured to death. It's tortured to death. π_π
I beg you not to be tortured!!!!
I'm back, fattened up and watching 2333, it's so cool. Then this article is so sweet, and the table is turned over and poked at me everywhere. It makes me so sad!!!
I'm back, fattened up and watching 2333, it's so cool. Then this article is so sweet, and the table is turned over and poked at me everywhere. It makes me so sad!!!
I really like this writing style. I saw the author said it was going to be finished. I hope it will be smooth and natural. I have read too many hasty and jumpy endings. I am really sad. I hope this article does not make readers feel like the leader is the leader and the tail is the tail. In addition, the author has worked hard along the way.
Why do I feel like the story is almost over before it even begins⊙▽⊙