Loved by Xiao He, Hated by Xiao He

Big I suppressed my nausea after reading this article Still can't help but slap bricks Is this what the love in your old man's heart looks like? So lowly that people will step on you? Could you please give your heroine some self-respect? Pregnant, abandoned and beaten, still asking for love from others The heroine is really no ordinary bitch I can't see what's worth loving about the male protagonist What's the advantage besides having a good face? There must always be something worth appreciating in long-lasting love, right? Could it be that the female protagonist is attracted by the male protagonist's lust?

I watched it in junior high school and watched it again.

Oh my god... It's so bloody, and the writing is not very good... There are so many people saying it's good for such a destructive article... I... Haven't you read the novel very often...

Overall. The story is very dreamy and very real. It's heartwarming and sadistic. The story is high quality and successful. There are only a few small personal opinions, which are listed below. First, let's talk about the male protagonist. The early male protagonist was well-portrayed, quite sensible, and quite perseverant. He had a scene with the female protagonist who had a loli flavor. After the scene, it seemed that the direction of the plot greatly hindered the portrayal of the male protagonist. Because of his mother, the male protagonist was very sensitive to that kind of woman, and then he was very sensitive to that kind of woman. That person named Zhao, and then Mo Yi, he is very sensitive to these things. Although it can be used as a reason for abuse, just imagine how such a precocious male protagonist is not aware of and cannot understand the needs of the female protagonist. Moreover, it is because of him that the female protagonist cannot have a good relationship or something. But I have been struggling with this matter for about four years. This is too long, after all, the male protagonist was so good in the early impression. Besides, if the male protagonist breaks through this level, it can at least be a bit shocking. Let's have a short story about how the male protagonist realizes and understands, and how these sensitive points are resolved. It is precisely because of the lack of such a seemingly insignificant scene that many readers have the impression that women like Xiao Die, Zhao, and Mo Yi, who take the initiative in their needs or have contamination in that regard, are bad women, bad women. It's a pity that such a paragraph never appeared until the end of the article, which means that the explanation of why Xiao He beat Mo Yi and had a tangled period of four years was not written out, leaving readers with a thorn in their throats and random comments and complaints. Secondly, let's talk about the heroine Mo Yi. Some readers complained about her. In fact, the heroine was portrayed quite successfully. First of all, she is a heroine who has the flavor of a Loli family. Naturally, in some respects, she is not as good at handling and seeing things as Sister Yu. Therefore, that aspect of her has been suppressed and cannot be released. Finally one day, this fact broke out and she killed the male protagonist. When I saw this scene, the successful portrayal of the heroine was considered to be her most pinnacle, and her charm was complete. I have to say that by now, the heroine has become fleshed out and can rank high in the Loli family. However, it is also the crux of the second half of the book. After that, the heroine felt the cold reception. She insisted on her usual style and suffered the fate without any explanation, and suffered it cruelly. This was correct, but the ending was too down. Since the overall ending is an upward tone, then the heroine in the result should also be an upward tone. Think about it, the heroine has suffered so many grievances. She was beaten by Xiao He, and there was an accompanying misunderstanding about marriage registration. The heroine has reached the lowest point here, which is the second climax of the whole story (the first climax is the XX male protagonist). However, this second climax was not recovered well, but was very weak and passive. It was clarified by the male protagonist on that radio program, and the clarification was also very vague. I always felt that the portrayal of the heroine was successful in the first climax. Unexpectedly, towards the end, the heroine was a little weak. Why, in the second climax, she did not explode, but just endured it without looking for "hate" towards the hero. "It is meaningful and effective to understand or heal. After all, when portraying characters with a lolita flavor, the most satisfying thing is the style of a royal sister that bursts out of them. This is the most satisfying, just like the first orgasm, when the heroine overtakes the hero. In the ending, the heroine is very negative, has been running away, in despair, and no longer loves. She has not tried hard to deal with various misunderstandings and various problems. This is probably why many readers complained about the heroine. Third, let me give a small personal opinion on the whole plot. Although it is from Mo Yi's perspective at the beginning, the focus is on Xiao He. Xiao He is very miserable, but the heroine is not very miserable. At least there are not many words to explain how difficult and difficult it is for Mo Yi to adopt He. Therefore, it feels like the beginning of the chapter is not as good as the second half. The story is tangled and attractive, and the heroine Mo Yi has three emotional modes: "mother", "sister" and "lover", which requires a lot of knowledge. It can also be seen that the author's writing power is quite amazing, and he can write these three emotions so vividly. This is why I read the whole article in one breath. This is why I was completely fascinated and said that I wanted to find a partner like the author or the heroine. However, because I like this feeling so much, I will be picky. If the bathroom scene is the turning point or opportunity for the "lover" mode, then what about the "mom" and "sister" modes? Is it because of the heroine's life experience? This is a bit It's too general. The heroine at least had a mother before she became an adult. Even if she wasn't physically present, it was the scene where the hero was abandoned. Well, that's it. That's the scene. After all, the heroine gave the hero a "home" and she was the "parent", mother and sister. The plots about learning Taekwondo reflect this aspect. However, because the better the author writes, the more greedy I become. I always hope to have more of these plots. The more the merrier. Because of this, I transformed from the mode of relatives to the mode of lovers. The plot should be more prominent and concentrated, continuous, and distinct. The consequence of vagueness is that the male protagonist's clearly separated views of relatives and lovers in his heart are somewhat inconsistent with the female protagonist's unclear views. Therefore, through the male protagonist, what we see is that the male protagonist comes to Teacher Mo's house as a relative and ends up as a lover. He is very entangled for a while. So, why can't we see the female protagonist struggling with this or any other words? Perhaps, on the female protagonist's side, the identity of a relative is already integrated with the identity of a lover, so that she Kissing the male protagonist or those intimate gestures give people the suspicion that she wants to train a child to become her ideal lover. What's more, it is precisely because the heroine does not have such entanglements that many readers complain that the heroine is JIAN. If she writes more about it, this change in identity will make the plot more exciting. Once I meet a good author or a good work, I can't stop talking about it. It's a habit of mine. It's just that the charm of the author makes me addicted. Okay, I really said a lot, so let's stop here. In short, I read a good article and I was really touched and moved. I sincerely thank the author for this rich and precious emotional experience.

Very attractive. . . .

I won't say anything anymore, it looks good~.~

I just saw this article this year, and I have read it many times now. Every time I am moved, I shed tears every time, and I never tire of reading it. When I saw Mo Yi worried and scared when he saw the car accident, and when I saw Xiao He saying that he was afraid that Mo Yi would run back in a hurry, I thought that the two of them loved each other at that time, but it turned out that they were still close friends. Later, I saw that Xiao He wanted to move to the dormitory for Mo Yi, and Mo Yi gave up Zhou for Xiao He. They only had each other, thinking that they understood their hearts, but in the end they still didn't. The last night I saw them being impulsive, I thought Xiao He understood his feelings, and thought that Mo Yi and Xiao He would be happy together, but in the end, they got Xiao He's hatred. In fact, if Xiao He didn't love Mo Yi, he could completely ignore him like his high school teacher, right? Maybe that's because Xiao He is too young to understand. But these are all painful for our lovely and affectionate Mo Yi, who spends every day in lovesickness, looking forward to Xiao He's return with his children. Seeing Xiao He being cold to Mo Yi, I felt really sad for Mo Yi, and seeing that slap, I really hated Xiao He. But fortunately, the final ending is happy, they love each other. Just like Ping said, "They will be together in the end. Mo Yi is Xiao He's only color, and Xiao He is Mo Yi's only concern."

It's very complete, the article is complete, and the story is complete. Although it is a complete fairy tale, it is still touching.

It's very touching. I like it. I read it in one sitting. Thank you author!!!

The idea is very good, written in the first person, but the writing style seems a bit thin, but the plot structure is quite good, especially the emotional line between the male protagonist and the female protagonist, which is clear and organized, one of the few self-justifying stories I have ever seen. Come on