Her favorite thing was watching all those handsome men and beautiful women gaze at each other with deep affection. If that wretched woman hadn’t dragged her out to sea to sneak a peek at her beloved Brother Yun, how could she have been so unlucky as to get swept away with her onto a backward, deserted island? Still, at least there were plenty of “beautiful women” here. Hehe. Wiping away the drool, she couldn’t possibly be a lecher, could she? At most, she should count as a modern-day mermaid princess. Hehe~~~~~~ Off in her own little world
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I feel like some things were not explained very clearly~~
Although the article is not skilled enough, it is worthy of encouragement. Come on, I believe the next story will be better.
Pack it up, take it away, I'll flash
Wow, great, I like it
I take it seriously. . Top it off. . Then scatter the flowers and float away. . .
What a gibberish. . . . . .
I was really speechless, but because I am the kind of person who sticks to it after I start reading it, I finally finished it.
The author is very young, the writing is not sophisticated, the plot is also very funny
I hope the following can be enhanced in the future
In fact, some things may not necessarily be expressed only through dialogue.
Pay attention to the description of details and the portrayal of the characters' psychology. This will be much better and the characters will be more full-bodied.
Give some encouragement
Passing by, please give me a thumbs up
I came back to make up for the points, it looks good~~~ It made me laugh so much that my stomach hurt at first
Want to know the story of Furong
I feel like some things were not explained very clearly~~
Although the article is not skilled enough, it is worthy of encouragement. Come on, I believe the next story will be better.
Pack it up, take it away, I'll flash
Wow, great, I like it
I take it seriously. . Top it off. . Then scatter the flowers and float away. . .
What a gibberish. . . . . .
I was really speechless, but because I am the kind of person who sticks to it after I start reading it, I finally finished it. The author is very young, the writing is not sophisticated, the plot is also very funny I hope the following can be enhanced in the future In fact, some things may not necessarily be expressed only through dialogue. Pay attention to the description of details and the portrayal of the characters' psychology. This will be much better and the characters will be more full-bodied. Give some encouragement
Passing by, please give me a thumbs up
I came back to make up for the points, it looks good~~~ It made me laugh so much that my stomach hurt at first