The Song of Commerce

At first glance, the author's wife is professional and has very profound literary skills. All the words, sentences, and allusions were carefully considered before writing the article. To this day, few people can meet such requirements when writing articles. But writing a novel may not be the same as doing research. The content of the article is very rich and the story is very clear, but when I read it, I always felt like I was reading a translation of ancient Chinese. The ancient classical Chinese is concise and concise, and the translation is also very straightforward and vernacular, but it is still very different from the language of popular novels on the market. Therefore, the author's wife's article is more difficult to read. It is not that the content is difficult to understand, but the language is different from other novels, and it is difficult to read it with the mood of reading a novel. This is probably why this article attracts fewer readers. And madam, sometimes when you describe characters, it feels discontinuous, like "Zimu heard this, she felt a little sad, she still couldn't forget Prince Sheng, Marquis Lu's words made her feel cold to the bones, and she wanted to leave." This sentence, five sentences, uses one name and three "she" in it, which makes people feel that they are describing different characters, which is a bit jerky. I tried to modify it according to the feeling of the novel, maybe not very good, just a small suggestion. "When Zimu heard these words, she felt a little sad. Although Lu Hou's words made her feel cold to the bone, she still couldn't forget Prince Sheng. Thinking of this, she couldn't help but want to leave the table. "

"Ode to Shang" is a novel with historical attributes. The book tells about the relationship between men and women in the Shang and Zhou dynasties, ancient customs, food culture, and the family origins and ancestors of each surname. The most important thing is that I finally found the innocent truth about Daji who was the eldest wife of Emperor Xin in history, and proved that Daji was not a beautiful fox but a black-faced woman, a snake totem.

I think it would be better if the author could annotate some of the more unfamiliar knowledge in the article in the author's words.

The author writes so well! 👍🏻 He is truly a professional in research. I just want to ask the author, are you based on Sima Bada in the previous Xianji Huiji and so on? So what should we call the children once they have more than four?

Coming. From the first chapter, you will feel that it is quite difficult to read. It is either a question of whether it is good or not, or it is not easy to read at first glance. Well, so I'll read it slowly and leave a comment under the corresponding chapter if you have any questions. However, for convenience, I sometimes use a small account. The author may not be able to find me, but don't doubt it, I'm here. There is only one concern after reading the first chapter: Is the author a professional in history? If you really have a high level of professionalism, you should be able to hold on and pretend I didn't say anything. But if not, I think the author can change some very historical things. In fact, I don't particularly understand now whether the author wants to write a historical fan or just a pure fiction placed in such an era. If you are a fan of history, you need to research all aspects such as possible props, word choice, character habits, etc. If you are not a professional, I am afraid that you will not be able to afford it. Otherwise, if you write a story about the pre-Qin Dynasty and the beginning is so awkward, if it attracts history fans, but the subsequent words and actions are completely wrong, even if the story is good, it will affect the reading experience. If you are writing fiction, you might as well weaken the characteristics of the times. This does not mean that you must write a fictional story. Of course it is also good for the author to study some history, but don't use too much force in this aspect, don't frame it rigidly, just mention one or two strokes for specific scenes. Because I haven't looked at the back yet, I might just be worried (palming my face), but when I see that the contract has been signed, congratulations, keep up the good work!

I came across this book at work. I just read the memorial chapter and then the big boss came. I hurriedly hid the browser and saved the URL when the boss couldn't see it, so I could read it at home. When I was studying, my high school teacher liked to test me on ancient Chinese. Knowing that I loved reading novels, he gave me two large books on the palace history of past dynasties. Therefore, I have always liked to read books that are very close to the real historical background and life. When I saw this book "Ode to Shang", I was very surprised at first. The author must have done a lot of research on the historical and cultural background of the Shang and Zhou dynasties as well as the culture and customs of various places at that time. He must also be very familiar with ancient Chinese prose, otherwise how could he write so well. There were a lot of things and words that I didn't understand in the first chapter. I looked them up in a modern ancient Chinese dictionary one by one (face covering...). I really like this kind of article. Although it requires a lot of brain cells, I felt like I learned a lot while reading the article. The author's writing style is also very good, but the description method is more like narrating an event, not like a novel, but like a narrative. Just reading Lu Gong Fengyun, I thought the protagonists were Bo Qin and Zi Mu. As I watched, I found that Zi Mu still thought about Wang Zisheng. Without Wang Zisheng, she only cared about the sisterhood with Yu Ji. It was useless for Bo Qin to like her so much. When I read Dayi Shang, I realized that it was actually about the time when Zi Mu, Yu Ji, Wang Zisheng and others were in the Shang Kingdom. Although I didn't quite understand why the author wrote in flashback, when I read it, I actually regarded them as separate individuals. After reading all the content that has been updated so far, the emotional lines of the characters who appear later have not been clearly shown to the readers. I also feel that Zimu's emotional lines are a bit like Mi Yue in The Legend of Mi Yue. She also has a childhood sweetheart whom she misses often, but cannot be together. In the end, she married someone from another country as a concubine, but at the same time she had an unusual relationship with someone else. Although she stayed with the man she married for the rest of her life, the thing she missed the most was her childhood sweetheart. The author's writing method first explains Zimu's life, and then starts again to write about her experiences and emotions when she was still young. This structure is very novel. The relationship between men and women in that dynasty was indeed very different from ours now. Although I didn't like the folk customs of that time and having multiple female servants and one husband, but there was nothing I could do about it. This was a story in the context of a big era. Even if I didn't like the emotional line that didn't end with one thing, there was nothing I could do about it. After all, this was considered historical data. I put some effort into reading it, and it is different from other novels that I read. Most of the time when I read novels, I read them at a glance, like consuming instant noodles, and forget it after finishing reading. But reading "Ode to Shang" gave me the feeling of reading the secret history of the palace, and I could also understand the folk customs of that time through the author's narration. The plot concept is average. I wonder if it has not entered into the main theme. I have not yet seen the main content of the author's writing of this book, and the pace of progress is a bit slow. In this way, the previous part of this article is not very attractive, but the writing style is good, and the writing technique is novel and attractive.

I've finished reading. There are a lot of rare words.

Ji Zhou has many boys who have sexual intercourse, and it would be unlucky for a woman to marry a gay man.

I feel that Zimu is a person with strong self-esteem.

Dayi merchants, Lu Zisheng, this is not recorded in the documents handed down from ancient times. Is the author a major in ancient characters and ancient Chinese? I am also interested in the history of the Shang and Zhou Dynasties. I am very happy that someone can use the history that has been dusty for thousands of years as a subject.