They are the Chinese-American KO rankings, and they are KO One. The once-in-a-decade KO exchange: will it mark the height of their friendship, or the prelude to a conspiracy?
When they collide in a dazzling display and blaze with brilliant light, what challenges await them?
"If I could truly destroy you, so what if we perished together?"
"Beautiful fairy tales all end at the wedding of the prince and princess. But who knows whether their married life is as wonderful as a fairy tale!"
"In my eyes, there are only brothers and brotherhood. That means more than anything."
"Even in this wretched state, I'm still more noble than those vermin who look dazzling on the outside but are filthy and disgusting within."
"I'm the King. I have no Queen. My kingdom doesn't need a woman telling me what to do."
They are the Chinese-American KO rankings, and they are KO One. The once-in-a-decade KO exchange: will it mark the height of their friendship, or the prelude to a conspiracy?
When they collide in a dazzling display and blaze with brilliant light, what challenges await them?
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I didn't understand the last chapter? So what happened to Xiaoyu's description? Good intentions itchy
Hahaha, I want to slap myself and call you a cheap hand
I also want to ask who attacks and who suffers
~(≧▽≦)/~Like like like like
Why am I still so eager to only write half of it~
Damn, when will it be updated? I thought King and Luo had that kind of relationship before, but I didn't expect it.
Hello, author, my name is Mo Ran. Originally, this list belonged to Zhi Xia, but because I couldn't find her, and I really like Danmei and Ultimate Class, it was transferred to me. I would like to express my sincere apologies to the author. As for Ultimate Class One, I probably saw it two years ago, or even earlier, and I have no impression of it. Now that I have read the large text, I remember a lot. Because the author has not written much about it, but judging from the current trend, Ilot and Rex should have an affair [laughing]. I personally like Rex, so I am looking forward to what kind of scenes the author will help arrange for them. Well, that's enough for these digressions, let's start the real long review. [Have you not started the long review yet? Sweat...] Foreshadowing Many times in the article, the author will use some imaginative sentences as foreshadowing. In fact, Mo Ran feels that this approach is not very good. Really good foreshadowing should be planted without the readers knowing. After the truth comes out, the readers will react with the feeling of "Ah, so that's what happened", and this will make the readers applaud. Description The author's description is not very good in Mo Ran's opinion. Some sentences do not fit the content of the article, and some sentences are a bit redundant. Please go back and read the details. Conversation Regarding the dialogue, the first thing Mo Ran wants to say is that what Wang Dadong said in it, "This is wonderful, isn't it," appears no less than three times, which will be very offensive to readers. At least Mo Ran doesn't like the same thing appearing multiple times in the article, which will make it feel repetitive and long-winded. Also, some of the words seemed not to be spoken by this person, but they were the kind that you should have said more tactfully, but ended up being very direct and not very consistent with the characters themselves. Magic The author of the large-scale magic only wrote one in the article. When Mo Ran read it, he thought: "Isn't this the one Liu Qian performed on Happy Camp?" Even the details are very similar, so what Mo Ran wants to say is that it is better not to include this kind of magic performed by a famous master in the article. In fact, the author can imagine it by himself, write a unique magic, and show a different visual effect. Wouldn't it be better? Organization The author's organization is not very good, it makes people feel a little disorganized, and he has written more than 40,000 words. Mo Ran can't tell what the main line of the article is. It may be related to the KO list, but in the previous chapters, the author writes about some personal issues, feelings, or relationships, which is not good. Logic The logic written by the author is not very smooth, and there are some contradictions in it. For example, in the first chapter, it is said that all the Chinese Americans on the KO list are mixed-race, but in the second chapter, the author indeed writes that there are not only Chinese, but also mixed-race. Isn't this contradictory? There are similar questions later, so I won't give examples one by one. I just hope that after the author finishes writing, he can carefully check the content of the article to avoid making mistakes. Details As for the details, some places that need to be written in detail are briefly mentioned by the author. As for the scene in the amusement park, Mo Ran feels that it can be solved in one chapter. Speaking of the amusement park, I don't know what the author wants to express, but does Rex, a big boy, know anything about fujoshi and attack and shou? This needs attention. Mo Ran has only seen these problems so far. Of course, the author still has some good points, such as the Chinese-American KO list and Ilot's dual personality. I personally feel that it is pretty good [Speaking of which, I secretly revealed a secret to the author. When Mo Ran was reading, I always read Ilot as Troy. Oh my, how careless. Well, finally I hope the author can work hard and finish this article. The plot is pretty good~ ==Di Ge Que Branch—Chang Ping Hall Mo Ran Ping==
(⊙V⊙) Well, what a fun Ilot
The friendship between Aguang and Ji is so inexplicable
Hey, here is a new article to cheer you up. I have been busy with exams recently and have no time to write a TAT article.