Phoenix Flute Song

All have been modified, I believe I won't disappoint the girl downstairs. Because it was my first time writing an article, I had some failures. Thank you for your support.

Thank you for the April Fool's Day wishes. I read the article carefully and found that the problems mentioned by this adult do exist. I don't want to find reasons for myself. I didn't grasp it accurately the first time I wrote it. In the past two days, I have corrected all the issues raised by adults. I believe it will be fine now. I hope adults can take another look at it and provide guidance.

At the beginning, it imitated martial arts novels and tried to follow the ancient style of dialogue, but unfortunately the results were not satisfactory. Occasionally, if a modern phrase is used in the ancient style, I will go crazy. I suggest that if the author is not proficient in the use of classical Chinese, he should switch to using modern language throughout the text. The language he has learned is neither fish nor fowl, which is annoying to watch. Some sentences are missing subject and object. Although you can know who is speaking from the above, it does not mean that they can be ignored.