A secret past, hidden away at sea for years.
A requiem for youth, sung before the final break.
Xiao You, the child of a prostitute and a Beiyang warlord's officer, was left all alone on an unnamed island, where she endured endless torment. Her body turned transparent, and she became immortal, never to age or die, all so she could forever curse the boy she loved, yet who had bullied her.
"I will make sure you never see me again, to repay you for today's humiliation!"
Back then, we were all petty children. We had so little love to begin with, and had no choice but to warm ourselves with hatred. When love and hate swept through like a typhoon, carrying everything away, the world changed beyond recognition, and a hundred years passed in the blink of an eye. Looking back suddenly, we realized that the days spent waiting at the foot of the tower had been the happiest of our lives.
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We were all once mermaids, rejected by the world, and unable to accept it in return.
________________★★★Dedicated to those humble little moments in our youth when we yearned for love.
Aji's ramblings: This is a story about "forgiveness." It is set at sea during the Republic of China era. There will be angst and healing. One update a day. It's definitely worth diving into, ladies, so jump right in without worry.
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After reading the beginning, I felt strange. The writing was good, but the abandonment rate was so high. I felt very anxious: first, I thought people's tastes were too sophisticated nowadays. Second, such a good article can be so cold. So after taking a closer look, I found that the author has two possible problems. First, the characters are too written, and their speech is formal. Of course, it may be related to the origins of these people, but it cannot give people a sense of intimacy. [I was anxious, "Mother-in-law, even if you have to drive us away, let us stay for one night... We were swept here by the big waves. We are at the end of our rope and have been without water or food for several days. Please take us in..." "Mother-in-law, I believe you are not a hard-hearted person. It is said that old people are as old as others, and young people are as young as others. You will also have relatives and daughters. You can't bear to die without saving..." I was so anxious that I couldn't speak coherently. I didn't know what I was talking about] - Look at this conversation, it's too written. What surprised me was that after hearing these two sentences, the old woman actually opened the door. From my point of view, there was nothing about these two sentences that could impress the old woman who firmly rejected the heroine. At least this reason must be reasonable. I personally think that an article is considered successful as long as it allows readers to completely follow the author's train of thought. In order for readers to be led by the author, they must identify with the world built by the author and convince readers that the world I built is real. Second, the layout is densely packed, and the main thread of the article cannot be seen. I came in because of the topic of mermaids. After reading a few chapters, I found that there was no trace of positive descriptions of mermaids (the ending sentence when the ship sank earlier does not count), so I inevitably lost interest. Third, there is a lack of impact. What keeps me reading is that at least the beginning is amazing, gripping the reader's heart and making the reader keep wondering what will happen next. The only thing that hooked me in this novel was the word mermaid, but what was too much was that the author dangled the bait in front of me, trying not to let me bite it. In the end, I stopped biting = = and asked you to hang me! Finally, the author has good writing skills, but the overall control of the novel still needs work. If the author is new, there is plenty of room for improvement.
There are several chapters that I can't see because of the server. For example, I can't see the chapter where Xiaoyou was caught and bled. I'm going to give you a little spoiler. Actually, it's mainly because I didn't understand it and I urgently need the author to clarify it. Thank you! Xiaoyou: This is more fantasy. It can be said that it is the product of a dead baby or a sea monster, so it will turn into a mermaid. There is another explanation that she is the child of Yuan Niang and an officer, but the island people hate her, so they imposed this explanation and self-hypnosis. The so-called need for blood should probably mean the blood of a living person. After that, Xiaoyou was actually dead. He must have died after so much blood was drained. But his wish was not fulfilled, and his resentment persisted, and he became a resentful spirit? Yan Ji: Is he the son of a brother and sister? I beg Qin to be with the heroine, the second brother is not worthy
Is this the rhythm of the end?
Come on~ It feels good o(*￣▽￣*)ブ
Not bad, please keep up the good work, the author.
Is this the time to give up?
What about the exciting news you promised? What about the heavy talk? How could you deceive my innocent and young feelings! Woo hoo... I won't love you anymore.
It turns out that the foreshadowing is here!!!
Sure enough, the second brother is the male protagonist, but Ala likes classmate Qin, how to break it? Damn, you have to figure it out.
This article has a very cinematic feel ~ too many mysteries! You have to watch it in one go!!