A Soft Girl's Revenge Through the System

There's only one point left for the ending, so work hard and write it quickly!

After seeing this, I have to say that this article attracted me very much at first. It also brings back the feeling that I wish I could go back in time and do it all over again. My brother at the beginning also made me think that it would be great if he could be with the heroine - he is mature, restrained, stable, reliable, loving and protective of his sister, and he is a good man who is cold on the outside and warm on the inside. But by the middle of the story, I really didn't like my brother being the male protagonist. Maybe it's this type of thinking that I can do anything by myself, and that as long as a woman just accepts and protects me, I don't have to think about anything or worry about anything, which makes me unable to fall in love with this person. At least I will feel that if this kind of man treats me, I will feel that he is disrespectful to me. The concealment in the name of love and the restraint in the name of protection made me have no love for the male protagonist. (The most annoying thing is that the villain succeeds every time and then the hero blames himself and then goes to the hero to save the beauty. I vomited three liters of blood!) Women are indeed inferior to men in terms of human body structure, but this does not mean that women are weaker than men. Proper protection is required. But why can't you fight side by side with the person you like in a planned way? Compared to this kind of man, I prefer a man who can explain things clearly even if he does something dangerous. The combination of knowing that the other person is going to do something dangerous but also trusting and respecting the other person's choice, and not taking risks unless absolutely necessary and making the other person worry about him is probably my favorite combination. However, everyone has their own preferences for carrots and vegetables. Men like the male protagonist should still be very attractive to most women, especially little girls who are still in school and like to dream. So I won't comment too much here to avoid being criticized by the group. The article itself is still very attractive to me up to the middle part. Even if I didn't like the male protagonist, it didn't affect my reading mood. But after reading the last few chapters, I have to say that I got a little bored. Except kidnapping is a threat. Maybe the author wants to show that the heroine can now take charge of her own business and is no longer the weakling she used to be. (Anyway, once she encounters something she can't solve, the hero will appear to solve the follow-up problems.) Maybe he wants readers to feel that the ups and downs of the plot are closely linked. But the constant threat of kidnapping and assassination only proves that those awesome characters are actually nothing more than embroidered pillows. ——Including the male protagonist. Forget about those who didn't know who was suspected at the beginning and were plotted. I don't want to complain about knowing that someone has a problem, but failing to make good arrangements to solve it and nip the danger in the bud. Every time, I passively wait until the other party takes action, which is detrimental to the heroine, and then try to turn the tide. I just want to know why both villains look down on the heroine? Doesn't the villain have all her information in hand? Wouldn't it be game over if they didn't underestimate the heroine? And the heroine is also a person who doesn't know how to discuss her own ideas. But this can't be blamed on her, after all, if she consulted with the group of people headed by the male protagonist, they would never let her do anything they thought was risky. Then he continued to confine and protect her without telling her anything. I'm doing this all for your own good, which makes you tired and unlovable. In addition, the male protagonist can't control himself and almost turns into a wolf regardless of the situation and priorities. This is also one of the reasons why I don't like it. There is always a feeling that in the later stages of writing, the author can no longer hold back. I don't know if it's my imagination. Overall, this article is quite readable. After all, if the heroine and the male protagonist are not to my liking, I will give up on the story. This is the first novel that relied on the heroine and the plot to keep me reading all the way through. (Actually, I still like the heroine very much. Except when she meets her brother.) But just because I like it, I always feel that the author can write it better. So when I see some flaws, I get angry for no reason. I hope the author will properly handle the details of the relationship between the male and female protagonists in future articles. In some special times, actually holding each other's hand tightly, giving a silent hug or gently kissing the forehead can actually reflect the deep love and respect between the two people for each other. QAQ PS. I, a deep-water overlord, accidentally rambled so much... This is so unscientific! What can I say about virginity? I don't know if the number of words is enough...

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Is this the connection between the two lives? Will my brother also connect the two lives?

By the way, Ni Xin disappeared like this, and now I have forgotten that this person is still there.

In her previous life, she just didn't let her brother play with the computer, and she also successfully framed Tongtong for bullying a child. Is it necessary to harm people like this? That Ni pervert is too crazy...

Sister Tongtong is really in trouble, she is so awesome

Why! I really want to see Tongtong and her brother having sex, hehe (>^ω^