
Stardust of Palando (Thranduil Fanfiction)
帕兰多的星屑(瑟兰迪尔BG向同人)
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Why do I feel like I'm going to torture Elian again...
At this point in the negotiation (the heroine declares that she is in love with someone else), I personally feel that we have gone astray. Female elves, it should be said that women (compared to men) are most likely to be emotional, which affects rational thinking and logical judgment (this is why there are so few women engaged in politics) Haflas attacks with the heroine's emotional point (although this attack point is very rogue, but it is directly effective, I think it is a good use), but if the heroine defends this, she will immediately lose her original advantage. It's like the heroine just used a provocation method, but it was used on herself, especially in the last paragraph, after talking about Sauron's love, she claimed to be in love with someone else. The heroine had already fallen into a trap when she argued against Sauron's question. Besides, if you fall in love with someone else, you will completely lose your mind. Let's not talk about whether people usually tell such private things in public. It would only be more inappropriate in such an important negotiation venue. It is difficult for an upright official to decide on family matters - things that can be concluded through rational logic are difficult to decide once a favor is encountered Therefore, whether you are deciding a case with a judge or at the negotiation table, try to avoid involving personal relationships. The simplest thing is to present facts and evidence (data). Because I don't know what the author's back-up plan is for the time being. Just talking about the heroine talking about "love" in the negotiation is careless. Because I feel that after writing this, it will be difficult to describe it later. I have a little humble opinion The heroine can accept the admission magnanimously (after all, it has been many years, and the heroine is not the same person, so she does not need to empathize with her feelings and is serious about the matter), and try to downplay the counter-effects of the matter in the negotiation (for example, after many years of this matter, paying the price of sleeping for thousands of years is to strengthen the identity of the elf, etc., Which can be fully proved), and then quickly return to the previous negotiation topic. Of course, you can also attack Khafres' daughter (the daughter is possessive of Sir, disobeying the king's orders, and Khafres is suspected of being self-serving), but this is the last resort. If Haflas gets entangled in this way, his prestige at the negotiating table will be lost.
Please update(; д;)
Did you commit suicide? ? ?
Wow, Suo's big eyes and body are so beautiful!
After finishing this chapter, the author never came back.
It's so beautiful ~ very memorable! More articles~
The best King Se fanfic I have read so far. Many classic passages left a deep impression on me and I often think about it. The request must be completed, start well and end well. I will wait. Can the author make a promise not to abandon the article?
Dear author, I will stay awake during the holidays to ask you to update your article. Can you please give me some credit?
Is the update promised by QAQ no longer available? [Crying]