Against the Tide of Fate

Sorry for taking so long to comment. Comment now! The name is quite good and arouses curiosity. When I saw it, I clicked on the link. But when I saw the copy, I was disappointed. Although I haven't read the content yet, as soon as I glanced at the copy, two words came to my mind—bloody. It's better to change the copywriting. Even if the content of the article is good, I am scared away by the copywriting... Okay, after clicking on the article - maybe because I have read too many novels, I can only say that the beginning of this article is cliché and has no new ideas. I think your beginning has also discouraged many readers. Well, after seeing the later part, I feel that the plot is much better. Is there something else going on in it? But no matter what, if the beginning is not good, you will not have the patience to read the rest. It can be seen that the author's writing style is not really good, but his description is better than that. Let me talk about the problems I found. Why is the heroine Mao so mentally strong as soon as she wakes up? After waking up in the second chapter, the third chapter will quickly adapt to her identity and give her some psychological activities, okay? It's too abrupt to go straight to the topic, isn't it? Also, is this husband gay? Do you want to be so bloody? Could it be that the female protagonist impressed the male protagonist later? And then came back from Tongbian? Do you want this? Furthermore, I think it's important not to use poetry when writing about time travel, because it's already become vulgar, and thinking about poetry makes me tired! Next, the emotions of this character are really turbulent. It's true that there is a heroine. Isn't this a bit big? Well, as I expected, the male protagonist turns out to be different. I have seen this scene many times. Well, after saying this, let's talk about it. What I said before was a bit harsh, now let's change the style. In fact, the fact that the heroine is a forensic doctor is a cute point that attracts me. I like this design quite a lot. Well, setting up some suspense is also a good method, but the setting is not coordinated, the plot connection is very stiff, there are too few transitions, and some necessary explanations are missing. I can't read my previous comment, it seems too toxic. In fact, we can find that the author is still young in writing, and some of the plot designs are not very innovative. Maybe you should read more novels! All I can say is that I read this novel once, but I didn't read it carefully because I couldn't read it carefully. Um, I found that the author had stopped reading for a while. Was he taking a break? Okay, let's sort out our thoughts and mood, and let's keep going! ——"Pomo ShopLong ReviewShort Review" Power supply, bear, book.

From the moment Ji Yue first posted the chapter of "Come Against the World" in Jinjiang, I was captured by her, and from then on I started a life of pursuing chapters. Although it is an article about time travel, it does not have the ridiculous plot of other time travel articles. (It's not that those plots are bad, it's just that I simply don't like them.) From the first appearance of the heroine, the author Ji Yue has been adhering to the spirit of "imaginary but not spoofing" creations. As long as you observe carefully, you will find that Ji Yue is an author with a very unique personality: In September, Ji Yue posted his first article a few days after registering this author account. I originally thought that she (I just thought she was a girl) would hit the new list like other new authors, but I didn't expect that she would stop updating when she almost had enough points to be on the list. But not being on the new list does not prevent her from becoming a signed author. That editor is really very discerning. It wasn't until today that I saw Ji Yue's "Coming Against the World" appearing on the editor's recommendation list for the first time on the Time Travel Channel. But in Ji Yue's column, there was no mention of being on the list at all. Very low-key. I like. To this day, Ji Yue still maintains these few hundred clicks, which is not a high rate, and silently continues to write articles. This moved me very much. It can be seen that Ji Yue wants to make this article a low-key luxury product. Let's get back to the point, let's talk about some of my thoughts after reading this article. The first is the writing style. Ji Yue's writing style feels like the reinforced concrete foundation under the entire building - solid! It's also like a general who already has victory in hand—playing steadily and calmly! The article contains a large number of references to ancient poetry, ancient costumes, and ancient official ranks, a large number of character creations, and a large number of task environment creations... All of which give people a natural and not far-fetched feeling. These are definitely not what an author who has just published for the first time can do. However, I have no supporting evidence to prove that "Ji Yue" is a vest of some great god. So think of it as your debut novel. Then let's talk about the characters. First of all, I really like the character of Yi Wenhao. After reading the copy, I originally thought he should be a man with a cut sleeve, but then I was moved by Xiao Eryu and finally had his sleeve cut off. But it turned out to be fake, and there was a shocking secret hidden behind it. Although his face is very cold and ruthless. But he treats his wife Xiao Eryu sincerely. It feels like I would trade the whole world for your smile. Awkward tenderness, I like it. Secondly, let's talk about the feelings of the heroine Xiao Eryu. Before this character traveled through time, he was a forensic doctor, and then the author arranged for him to try his skill in the court. This idea is very good: even if you were a forensic doctor before, you will be a dignified wife of the Marquis after time travel. How can you just engage in the previous affairs in such a drastic way, so this arrangement is very real. Okay, after talking about the hero and heroine, let's talk about this character named Li Muyuan (although there is only one scene...). As I said just now, I don't like prank characters. But this Li Muyuan's appearance is just a humorous person, not some nutritious spoof. The appearance of this person brought a bright color to Wenwen, who was originally a little heavy. The article suddenly showed a lot of liveliness. I hope this character's surprises can last until the end. That's all. In a word, it's high-end and classy! I like this "Come Against the World"! So I dedicate my first long review to Ji Da Da. Come on guys. And you should also hurry up and fill in the new trap "Hey, I said scoundrel".

Is it the first time that the Third Young Master Li Muyuan appears? I feel like a lively master. With the addition of such a person, the article suddenly became more alive and became more inspiring~

The language is simple and unpretentious, but the writing is full of wonderful touches; the stories are closely linked and still eloquently told. Regarding Xiao Eryu's gradual development, looking carefully, Ji Yue explained a little common sense-paying for what you want may not necessarily get excellent returns, but treating people sincerely will always bring many unexpected gains. At the same time, Sister Jiyue describes the character's personality and psychological dynamics in detail, and the revelation of one mystery leads to the next. For this kind of narrative technique, people really love and hate it - what a good writer. Looking forward to the next chapter...

The copywriting is so well written~ The writing is very nice and the plot is well designed. Collect it first and then talk about it~

It turned out to be a fake cut sleeve, which was fine, fine. From the looks of it, is he going to seize the throne next? What kind of hatred requires even the emperor to be killed?? Aren't the Liu family's father and daughter the worst?

The author's writing is fluent, clear, with twists and turns in the plot and compact structure. Quoting from classics and picking it up at your fingertips - there are poems in the book, paintings in the poems, stories in the paintings, the text is well-written and eloquently told... Wonderful, clever use of professional vocabulary - it can be seen that the author has worked hard on this article for a long time, and although it is his first work, it has the style of a masterpiece; smooth, the chapters are tightly connected, and there is no sense of disconnection - It shows the author's keen logical thinking; in detail, the story plot, characters' personalities, psychological changes, and all the big and small things in the book are explained clearly and smoothly - it can be seen that the author is thoughtful and strategizing... I have been in Jinjiang for many days, and it is difficult to find a good article. Reading this article today, I really sigh, how lucky it is! Okay, now let's talk about the downsides. I'm not talking about you as the author, your article is very good, but please update it quickly so that I can see what happened to the person named Liu!!!

I saw it in the bar, the copywriting is very attractive, I think it's cool. . Sprinkle flowers~~

These two chapters are so long. . I feel a little dizzy~~~Come on, come on

Forgot to score, make up...