Okay, I read this article again today when I had nothing to do (the company documents were crying aside... You remember me when you were so stupid). It was about the fifth time I read it. I like to take it out and look through it when I have nothing to do. It's also a disease. I don't know if I need treatment...
The first and second times I read it, I probably paid too much attention to the direction of the story and failed to notice the foreshadowing the author had laid in the text. The third and fourth time I read it, I was too focused on the foreshadowing and didn't have time to notice the author's humor. So this time I noticed it! The author's humor! You really get a different feeling every time you read it! I don't know what I'll get next time, but I'm looking forward to it.
Okay, I have a lot of nonsense, let's talk about the text. After watching it a few times, I discovered that Jiang Bo's character is actually a bit funny: For example, in Chapter 3: "I stood on the stargazing tower of Ni State again. In fact, I don't have to stand in such a high position, because it is not me who actually implements the rainfall. But He is right - I just like to make mysteries." Don't you think he is interesting? Obviously in more formal occasions, you can have another style of painting... You are obviously very happy when the rain succeeds, but you have to keep a straight face and only show a little smile, which is kind of cute and cute...
Jiang Bo thought he was ruthless, but he was not like this. In order to save Tai Chou's life, he did so many things at the expense of trouble. He said that the kid was trouble, but he was still willing to listen to Tai Chou's thoughts, willing to reach out to rub him, comfort him, and bid farewell to him. Of course, Hao was still there. Accepted him; for He, even though he didn't need to take a bath, he asked if there was hot water; and he merged Manman with Manman, which... Can only be said to be very mischievous; for Tushu, he did so many things, and even though he thought he was a ruthless person, he promised Tushu's mother, and did so much for the promise.
In addition, I am very curious about Jiang Bo's persistence in loyalty. In the fifth chapter, I personally feel that it is a place where important foreshadowing is buried, but the author forgets it after writing about it...
The ending of Tai Chou in the first story is conceivable. People are like this. When they are lonely, those who accompany them are often the first to be abandoned after success. Tai Chou is just too young and cannot see clearly for a while. Fortunately, they still cherish each other in the ending. But I can't help but think that if they were adults, the ending would be to die of old age and never interact with each other. What about the second story of Tu Chou? This story contains too many things. The most humble of human nature (the slug wants to be accepted by others), the most complex (the secret turmoil among the villagers), the most tender (the slug's mother still protects him even though she knows he is not her biological son), and the most saddened are all blended by the author into a small story. In the end, the topic of death feels very heavy.
So now it's time to talk about the pseudo-ending. To be honest, I think the content is really huge all at once! I didn't quite realize it. The author is Aragami. I don't know if I guessed it myself or if it was spoiled to me by the author himself (ORZ). Anyway, I feel that it really fits the author's usual characteristics of being a spoof and lacking in inspiration. Maybe I still have expectations for a complete novel. So, to be honest, I only read the pseudo-ending once (I can't accept it ending like this! Wow...). So, I'm not really qualified to say much. I just feel that the author's structure is still great.
In addition, I am still looking forward to the author's update. I haven't read it yet, so I plan to wait until this section is updated before reading it (laughs) Dear author, please remember to update when you are in Japan!!!!!!
I don't know how serious it is, I haven't read it yet and I want to ask whether this article is mainly criticized. I usually don't read bl articles, but the comments seem to be very good.
→_→Is this the Zhijian you are talking about?
→_→Yoshi. . . . So much has been written.
Well, happy holidays.
Sit back and wait.
Just let it out as you want, I also love the dark protagonist~
By the way... There is only one chapter as promised... = = It's not enough, dear
Finally updated. It's a pity that people on mobile phones can't see the picture... The world view is completely broken! Is this going to be an expansion or an ending? It feels like it should be expanded! By the way, this literary world strategy is powerful! Keep up the good work! By the way, I think that old man is very cute... Is he an old Liu Jiang?
Let me take a look. I haven't been online for a long time. I'll save it first.
There's actually an update... I'm really shocked ⊙▽⊙
Okay, I read this article again today when I had nothing to do (the company documents were crying aside... You remember me when you were so stupid). It was about the fifth time I read it. I like to take it out and look through it when I have nothing to do. It's also a disease. I don't know if I need treatment... The first and second times I read it, I probably paid too much attention to the direction of the story and failed to notice the foreshadowing the author had laid in the text. The third and fourth time I read it, I was too focused on the foreshadowing and didn't have time to notice the author's humor. So this time I noticed it! The author's humor! You really get a different feeling every time you read it! I don't know what I'll get next time, but I'm looking forward to it. Okay, I have a lot of nonsense, let's talk about the text. After watching it a few times, I discovered that Jiang Bo's character is actually a bit funny: For example, in Chapter 3: "I stood on the stargazing tower of Ni State again. In fact, I don't have to stand in such a high position, because it is not me who actually implements the rainfall. But He is right - I just like to make mysteries." Don't you think he is interesting? Obviously in more formal occasions, you can have another style of painting... You are obviously very happy when the rain succeeds, but you have to keep a straight face and only show a little smile, which is kind of cute and cute... Jiang Bo thought he was ruthless, but he was not like this. In order to save Tai Chou's life, he did so many things at the expense of trouble. He said that the kid was trouble, but he was still willing to listen to Tai Chou's thoughts, willing to reach out to rub him, comfort him, and bid farewell to him. Of course, Hao was still there. Accepted him; for He, even though he didn't need to take a bath, he asked if there was hot water; and he merged Manman with Manman, which... Can only be said to be very mischievous; for Tushu, he did so many things, and even though he thought he was a ruthless person, he promised Tushu's mother, and did so much for the promise. In addition, I am very curious about Jiang Bo's persistence in loyalty. In the fifth chapter, I personally feel that it is a place where important foreshadowing is buried, but the author forgets it after writing about it... The ending of Tai Chou in the first story is conceivable. People are like this. When they are lonely, those who accompany them are often the first to be abandoned after success. Tai Chou is just too young and cannot see clearly for a while. Fortunately, they still cherish each other in the ending. But I can't help but think that if they were adults, the ending would be to die of old age and never interact with each other. What about the second story of Tu Chou? This story contains too many things. The most humble of human nature (the slug wants to be accepted by others), the most complex (the secret turmoil among the villagers), the most tender (the slug's mother still protects him even though she knows he is not her biological son), and the most saddened are all blended by the author into a small story. In the end, the topic of death feels very heavy. So now it's time to talk about the pseudo-ending. To be honest, I think the content is really huge all at once! I didn't quite realize it. The author is Aragami. I don't know if I guessed it myself or if it was spoiled to me by the author himself (ORZ). Anyway, I feel that it really fits the author's usual characteristics of being a spoof and lacking in inspiration. Maybe I still have expectations for a complete novel. So, to be honest, I only read the pseudo-ending once (I can't accept it ending like this! Wow...). So, I'm not really qualified to say much. I just feel that the author's structure is still great. In addition, I am still looking forward to the author's update. I haven't read it yet, so I plan to wait until this section is updated before reading it (laughs) Dear author, please remember to update when you are in Japan!!!!!!
I don't know how serious it is, I haven't read it yet and I want to ask whether this article is mainly criticized. I usually don't read bl articles, but the comments seem to be very good.
→_→Is this the Zhijian you are talking about?
→_→Yoshi. . . . So much has been written.
Well, happy holidays. Sit back and wait.
Just let it out as you want, I also love the dark protagonist~ By the way... There is only one chapter as promised... = = It's not enough, dear
Finally updated. It's a pity that people on mobile phones can't see the picture... The world view is completely broken! Is this going to be an expansion or an ending? It feels like it should be expanded! By the way, this literary world strategy is powerful! Keep up the good work! By the way, I think that old man is very cute... Is he an old Liu Jiang?
Let me take a look. I haven't been online for a long time. I'll save it first.
There's actually an update... I'm really shocked ⊙▽⊙
I always feel like the author is cheating...