Reborn: A Different Kind of Fireworks

Doesn't the heroine have the ability to read minds? Can't she even use it? It's better not to have anything~

I feel like the characters are all a bit childish. Alas, the man in the first chapter mysteriously doesn't appear. It's actually very strange. It's incoherent. Come on, my dear. I feel like you're not that old. You can continue to do your best.

After the dividing line, there is such a sudden section. It is very strange. It is recommended not to do it or to go too far and to be more natural.

I don't understand how you can do this. The heroine didn't feel sorry for the heroine and was framed in vain. The heroine felt sorry for the heroine and got a happy ending. Co-authored: Isn't it so easy to forgive something that happened to you? Are you kidding me? If it were me, retaliation would be polite. Author, I really think this article is completely meaningless, praising truth, goodness and beauty? Thanks, I hate the Holy Mother. In any case, it is not easy to write an article and persist in it, and it is even more difficult for the author to have a big heart. +2 Points

Gu Liang, first of all I bow and apologize. Due to the sudden busyness at the end of the year, this review has been delayed again and again. It's the night of New Year's Eve. I haven't watched the Spring Festival Gala with the fireworks. I'm rushing to comment. I'll go on a trip tomorrow morning and catch up on my homework~~ Closer to home, Gu Liang's article, I have been taking time to watch the fireworks. When I read the text for the first time, I first thought of Leslie Cheung's old songs and liked his desolate, melancholy and proud character. I wonder if Gu Liang's writing also pursues this feeling. But as a copywriter, it seems that the content conveyed to readers is a bit lacking, which is what many girls say lacks cuteness. In fact, even if the article is not cute, everyone hopes to have a general understanding of the story before getting into the main topic. Just like a favorite brand when buying clothes, everyone also has their own favorite themes when reading stories. Just a label about rebirth is a bit sparse. In fact, the mind-reading ability after rebirth can be exposed, which can attract many new readers. When I enter the main text, I feel that Guliang is very sincere in his writing. Although he claims to be a novice, his writing style is still passable. In terms of character and plot setting, the thinking is clear and reasonable, and there is not much problem. But the article is not particularly attractive overall. After thinking about the reasons, Fireworks summarized it as follows: 1 The writing style is a bit immature. In this way, on the one hand, it is because Guliang did not grasp the rhythm very well when writing the article. On the other hand, it is because Yanhua discovered some problems that often occur among novices. For example, let's take a look at the first chapter, which explains the heroine's life events. I have seen many good rebirth stories. The story before death is often omitted. The main reason for this treatment is that the events during life are not too important, or the author will mention them later and intersperse them. As for your handling method, Gu Liang, you used summary language in the first chapter to describe the rather complicated events during your lifetime. Yanhua feels that this is probably because the writing rhythm is not grasped well. After handling it this way, it feels very rushed and greatly affects the writing style. The writing style in the rest of Gu Liang is actually okay, but only the first chapter feels sloppy. The dividing line that novices like very much also makes readers feel uncomfortable, and the scene switching is a bit stiff. 2 The plot arrangement is slightly scattered. In fact, here I want to praise the girl's character creation first. As a newbie, it is very good at this level. It is not easy to make it reasonable, because to make it look real and delicate to readers, it depends on the word reasonable. For example, the process of the heroine adapting to her superpowers, Yanhua felt that Guliang handled it well, but it needs to be mentioned that maybe the writing is not proficient enough, and some descriptions are still unnatural. For example, the part where the heroine ran out of the classroom was written too simply, and she ran out in just a few sentences, which gave the reader a somewhat artificial look. Overall, if the plot is successfully set up, compact enough, and leaves suspense, this will be a good article. This article of Guliang feels a bit scattered. After the heroine is reborn, the current situation, her mentality, the people she meets, the things she encounters, and her future plans are all told to the readers in a single way (that is, the form of expression). Most of them are expressed in a narrative way, so the text feels too bland and the plot feels scattered. If there are more background enhancements, character dialogues, and emotional descriptions, the key points will come out and there will be more highlights. The above are the words of the fireworks family. Please take the essence and discard the dross. I wish you a great success! By12|PuFireworks

I'm also obsessed with Rhythm Master recently

This Axi seems to have a good background. . .

Reminds me of hearing your voice. Wouldn't it be great if the heroine also wears headphones~

Decided to start reading the article! I like the heroine's skills

What happened in the second life? How would the heroine's family react when they knew the truth? What will be the fate of the female supporting cast? I hope the author can write about it. I especially want to know what will happen to the heroine's family after they know the truth. I feel that the heroine is the biggest victim. The Song Lian in the first life It was to use the heroine, and Xia Mingyu used this to take revenge on the heroine after she was reborn. Although she didn't know it, she felt that the heroine was too unjust. This is the best performance of being shot while lying down. In the third generation, the heroine returned a good ending. Let's not talk about it. If the second generation heroine gets the end she deserves, this karmic fate will be over. The author will write it out...