[Prince of Tennis] Oshitari-kun's Wolf Girl

After reading this, I suddenly felt that it was quite annoying to endure enough, ugh! I'm used to reading novels where the male protagonist has never touched other women, and I really feel that I can't bear it,,, and I'm speechless.

You finished so quickly. . . . .

I asked, what are you going to do when you return to Qianyu's house... Do you want to give Qianyu Zi Shenma a good blow? I love hitting such a brain-dead woman the most... Come on, my dear... I am very happy to have my role in this chapter, but when will the second male lead come out?

I said dear child. . . . . . . Are you moving too fast? How did it become like this so quickly? Xiao Bai is Qian Yu Zi. . . . . . OMG. . . . Why did you think of such a plot? . . . . . It's a little too fast... I'm confused. . . . . .

There are many views on Ninzu, such as gentleman, elegance, charm, literary boy, and the other one is that he is from Kansai. I read this article very carefully and found several serious problems. The following arguments are just a reader's basic views and are only for reference. You can also see which paragraph touches your heart and what is lacking in the novel. When correcting, I prefer to start with the copy. Your copy can only explain the beginning. A young boy bought a dog named George, but he mistakenly changed it into a girl halfway through. However, it failed to hit my cute point. One is that such copy is too concise and cannot express the essence of the novel. The other is that it seems too dry and I don't have the urge to read it. If it's not troublesome, you can change the copy first and write out the cute points of the novel that you think will appeal to most people. I don't know how you understand Renzu, but in the previous article I felt that Renzu's character was broken, probably because he didn't grasp it well. Even if Renzu was twelve years old at the time, he already had a shadow of elegance at that time. After all, many things are born and not nurtured. I am more picky about character and behavior, so don't mind. In fact, I can be considered a party-goer for the Net King, but it's not that serious. Has the author ever watched Atobe? From it, we can know that Ninzu Boy just arrived in Tokyo but missed the train. He only met Atobe at Hyotei campus, and they even had a competition. Atobe went to school in England during his elementary school years, and returned to Japan just after the beginning of junior high school. On the first day of school, as a freshman representative, he announced that he was the king of Hyokui, defeating many senior students. I don't think Atobe would be willing to be inferior to others with his pride. Everyone in the Net Kings has their own pride. They have the strength and ability to reach the top and will not let anyone suppress them, especially Atobe. The young master is overconfident. How can he be willing to be a junior member and practice his swing every day? No matter how talented a person is, no matter how athletic he is, without substantial practice and competition, he is just a novice who cannot compete on the stage. What do you think of the strength of Ninzu and Atobe? Atobe is a person who can beat Tezuka and Sanada equally. Would he only take up tennis when he is twelve years old? When Atobe and Ninzu first got to know each other, they called each other by their last names. However, after they took a walk and watched a street tennis match and defeated their opponent miserably, they suddenly called each other by their first names. This was very abrupt. In Japan, only relatives and friends with particularly close relationships would call each other by their first names. Look at Tezuka and Fuji, their classmates are still called by their last names instead of their first names after three years. Some bonds require fighting side by side, so they are not handled appropriately here. What I said earlier about Renzu being a bit weak was well-founded, but he was a bit naive at first? A little childish? Ninzu is also a wolf (?!). You also said that he is a Kansai wolf. Wolves are persistent and sharp creatures. I think Ninzu should have this kind of momentum since he was a child. That kind of cynicism and vigilance when encountering serious things cannot be ignored. Let's talk about the heroine of this article. The gap between the previous and later chapters is too big. Even if she forgets the past and becomes naive due to some very special reasons, many things that need to be explained still need to be explained. To be honest, Qian Yuzi's small tricks are not enough at all. Anyone with some brains can see that something is wrong. She can just say that it is better to let witnesses appear. Why wait until all disadvantages and accusations are pointed at her without explaining the reasons, waiting to be misunderstood and bullied? It is really cowardly. Don't say that the heroine doesn't know how to explain it because of her pure heart. In fact, she is not the White Lotus she seems on the surface in some matters. After that, she ran out of Hyokui and accidentally arrived at the hospital where Yukimura was. What should I say about Yukimura? Compared with others, he was very complicated. Maybe it was because he looked at the blue sky in the hospital and wanted to stand on the tennis court. The torment of the disease made him look a little depressed and haggard. I am haggard, but I can still feel the kingly aura around me. I have to admit that Yukimura is willful and extreme. His way of handling many things will make many people dissatisfied, but he has such courage that makes us all feel that all his actions are correct. Let me think about what Yukimura's reaction was at that time, "I'm a boy." That's probably what he said. As far as I know, he hates others mistaking him for a girl because of his soft facial features. Then he invited the heroine to stay in the hospital... The hospital ward is often very tense (this is what I say based on reality), and you live in a hospital, not an apartment, and the hospital is not run by the Yukimura family. You have to pay hospitalization fees for hospitalization, QAQ, and the heroine is not sick, so why would she go to the hospital casually? Yukimura is very exclusive. Except for his family and teammates, he keeps a proper distance from everyone and confuses people with his superficial gentleness, so many people think that he is gentle, but that is only gentleness to the people he recognizes. I don't think Yukimura allows the heroine to enter his world so easily. Do you know, I thought Brother Cun would be the legendary male partner, but you actually arranged for an original girl to become Brother Cun's girlfriend QAQ Although it is common for teenagers to fall in love in Japan, Yukimura fell in love in junior high school. This makes me, Murakami, so embarrassed. After the two people meet, the next chapter is an extra chapter... Compared to the hasty explanation in the extra chapter, I appreciate the slow introduction in the following text, otherwise it will make me feel that this is a novel with multiple female protagonists and multiple male protagonists. In fact, from the characters in it, I know that it is actually a familiar person being substituted into the novel, right... Because I saw the familiar name Orz The past and past of the heroine suddenly came to mind. Somehow, she regained her memory. For some reason, the heroine and the boy Renzu were separated again. It was not clear how many years they had missed. However, when the two met again, the heroine became Qing Sikawa. I want to put it bluntly, if this is an original romance novel, it would be good. The key is that it is a fanfic, and the scope of fanfic is very large. Many people who appear in the original work must have a certain role. The characters who appear should not be anticlimactic, otherwise how can we explain the previous text. By the way, I haven't finished speaking yet. Ahem, I have a lot to say... = = That Qian Yuzi's brother Qian Yulan, even if your sister controls you, you still have to have a limit, okay? What has become of your sister? It seems that you are not stupid, so why are you helping others? Children need to be educated from an early age. Such indulgence will harm her!! Compared with Qian Yulan, a guy who is so obsessed with girls that he is about to develop the Love Girl Syndrome, I admire Qian Yucheng who has never appeared before. Can Qian Yuzi be a young lady from a big family with her virtue? There is no dignity at all, she is a complete shrew. Why does Renzu's mother think that Qian Yuzi is suitable to be the next mistress of the Renzu family? Have you not been able to see this clearly after spending so many years in the upper class? Renzu's mother is strong, Renzu can be even stronger, and she won't push herself to this point. Finally, let me summarize. First, whether it is an original character or an original character in King of Nets, there are differences in personality. How can I predict that Qian Yuzi is the most perfect one?! = = Second, I couldn't see the direction of the writing style at the beginning. It was only in the middle that I understood the identity of the heroine. To be honest, I really wanted to complain about the profession of killer. Third, it is no different from the original novel. There is no plot about the King of Nets, and few princes appear. The time spent with them is like passing by, and the days pass by for months. What kind of friendship can be cultivated? Fourth, the scenes in which the female supporting character frames the heroine have long been out of fashion, although I do like the plots of frame-up and counter-frame-up. Fifth, if it weren't for Qian Yuzi and Qian Yulan being siblings, I would have directly thought that Qian Yulan was madly in love with Qian Yuzi and would do anything for her. Sixth, the progress of the heroine and Renzu is too fast. There are not many scenes that mainly belong to them. They fall in love with each other inexplicably and are together... Next, I would like to make some suggestions for modification: First, fan fiction is based on the original work, adding original protagonists and characters from the original work to develop another plot. However, one very important thing to remember is that there should not be too many original characters. If there are more original characters than fan characters in the text, it only means that it is an original work disguised as a fan fiction. Secondly, the most taboo things for fans are collapse, darkness, and distortion. The characters cannot be collapse, and the original work should not be corrupted. Everyone has their own destiny, which will make readers uncomfortable. Third, the direction of the novel is very important. In a good novel, each chapter must have focus and content, otherwise it will become a running account. Fourth, the writing style is a bit rough, it would be better if it could be more delicate. Don't explain things clearly in one stroke, and don't be muddled if there is nothing necessary to exist. The rest are the issues I mentioned earlier. This long review is for reading and reference only. I hope the author can change the routine a little. The novel is published for readers, right? We all hope that more people will read our article, so it is wiser to revise the article. If you still don't understand something, or if you have any objections to the comments, you can come to Aiteme. Yuanfang, what do you think_Long Comment Wenpu: Qiqi

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There's more! For the school festival, if you join forces with Hyokui, you are not allowed to let Kage wear women's clothes! Otherwise I will definitely kill you next time we meet!

By the way, who is that person following? And what is the truth about Qianyu's family?

It turns out there's a kiss at noon! Congratulations! Baozi is so fast!

Xuan, you are also evil! After eating and wiping everything clean, by the way, my Xiaojing moves very quickly! Also, you still have to think about throwing yourself down and being knocked down! I'm waiting for the extra episode!